Hide in me by yomah
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Anna came over weekend to talk and see how I was doing, I am glad she did.
This is only a work in progress and not finished. I feel it is lacking something but I did not want to lose the image I had in my mind.
What's wrong or missing?? I have the hardest time whenever I try do normal crap and not angry psycho-shit, as my instructor calls it.
Any help is welcomed,
-yo
Comments (13)
i see the image as complete as is. What is bothersome to me(opinion) Is the text. I would rather let my mind guide me in the story the image tells rather than the artists guiding me to a conclusion I may not feel for... otherwise. I love the grain the profile is lovely and the tear is perfect. the Knee does not seem like a knee when i first look but comes together as i examine the image. nice work regards james
I disagree with Mr. James. I always like seeing a good image with nice poetry with it. Perhaps Im just not that good reading images;) Anything missing? Maybe some more contrast in the image, sharper whites. Other than that I wouldnt change a thing. Excellent work!
I too like ambiguity in imagery but in this case I believe the text is absolutely required as you are communicating something specific: without it your message would be lost. Despite its bittersweet edge this is beautiful Yo, it speaks of love, no more, no less. Truly poignant.
what abeautiful image. full of hope. i think it's perfect, the composition is so "right". excellent.
What a stunning job! Marvellous work! Don't know what you can do more...but expecting some great art! Felt the same this weekend... Have a great day....
I love it just as iy is Yo, beautiful for beautiful Anna.
Beautiful, and touching. The light is soo great - the line of the profile fascinates my eyes and my thoughts. The text brings so much to this image, it definitely belongs there. I'm not sure if you should add anything more there - there's something missing as you said; but maybe that something ought to be invisible; it's something outside the image that the viewer is trying to find... And what is so clearly seen there is love. Deep love. And great artistic experience. Incredibly beautiful work!
hi Yo... this is another strong piece of yours... not question... it has a deep and strong feeling behind... i guess jim said it... :) i love the light here too - as titta mentioned... you ask for improvement... i'm not sure... it seems to be quite "finished" already... you could try to work with some colour in here... or some tones - just a hint of colours for her - or instead some touch of colour in the frame... not sure.. i gues any further improvement would include a lot of play and try and take back...
I can see nothing missing... a wonderful poetry, a wonderful gift of love deep from the bottom of your heart... and thats it! Lovely presentation, great toning - creates a wonderful mood here. No angry psycho-shit, just love... :-) U still want more....? Thats the aim - love in some way...
Great image... Excellent pose and expression...
perhaps you feel something is missing because it doesn't have the anger, so you feel uncomfortable with it. ~lost
Great image! It looks finished to me!
she is very lovely....it is finished...and thinking you should be a writer...you bring everything to life..you have an amazing gift..rub a lil on me please..lol..