i did not die, i just went to hide by irenicusknightingale
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I am not there
You did not care
I am the dream
I am not what I seam
I watch from above
My eyes filled with love
And I watch the Train
Through the rain
As it comes closer
And closer,
There I died
No one cried
Now i watch from heaven
My daughter, near eleven
So my friend
Please just pretend
I did not die
I just went to hide
This was written for Abigail (in the picture showing) her mother died in a car crash five years ago, so I wrote this poem about her, I am only 13 so It may not be fantastic, but I would appreciate any feedback left
Comments (7)
I FEEL YOUR ANGER SARROW PAIN AND I ALSO FEEL YOU JOY HAPPINESS AND LOVE YOU HAVE DONE GREAT
I can almost feel your compassion coming out of this piece. Good work. One advice I must give to you, dont try to be fantastic, no one writes so that he/she can impress other people. You should always be true to yourself and what you are trying to say. Make your work honest, not comercial. Some may disagree to this but thats what I think. Cheers.
Jessika, you did a wonderful job on this and I hope it can comfort your friend in some way.
Very well put. It says everything perfectly, and it was very poignant.
real good one
Both your poetry AND your graphic are excellent works of art: Simply done, but deeply emotive, very effective! BRAVO!
I'm sure you friend Abigail was comforted by this...shows compassion on your part that a lot of folks never achieve...develop this tendency and you'll have a rewarding life..... peace bobby stahr