Prisoner of My Pain, Captive of My Chains by Metonicus
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Prisoner of My Pain, Captive of My Chains
Your beauty stings like a whip,
Your eyes burn like fire,
Your skin is so soft
It crushes my soul.
Your hair so fiery
It blinds my eyes.
Your lips so tender
They fill me with pain.
For you sit so distant
And so comforted
Surrounded by others
Comments (5)
I think this is beautifully tragic, and it really reminded me of all the angsty feelings that tend to exist in teenagers... AND adults. :) Nice job, thanks for sharing it.
I don't see a stalker here, I see a romantic shy young man who adores his love from a distance! Superb writing for one so young! I love the line "Your beauty stings like a whip"...oh, yes...I've known this...
Wow... this is really.. almost made me cry. Why do we love our chains? The remind us of what we used to feel. Better feel pain than feel nothing sometimes.
So sad and beautiful. Thank you for sharing this part of your life....
You write beautifully. Tortured prose need not get misinterpreted as a stalker's credo.