This is beautiful.. I love how you see winter. It is like diamonds and pearls on things that are normally broken down are withered. Took a ride first big snow we got this year..and when you went down a tree lined country road it seemed as if you were going into a long beautiful cooridore of a winter castle. We complain alot about how cold it is.. and how it keeps us stuck in a lot.. but it's very beautiful and you show it with this piece.

I love winter also and your peom was wonderfull!very well thought and put:-)Byeeeeeeeee calum

Here the white contrasts with stark black trees. The houses are half hidden by snow though now naked where the foliage once covered them. This free verse style retains a more local psalmist. Can I venture a number 150 and a
118/119@22 or will 151 take us down the hill into apocrypha and orthodoxy?

This is wonderful, Susan. Few things are more beautiful than a new fallen snow, and it's one of my favorite things to see. You've described it beautifully here. You're right, this goes very well with my Winter Moonlight fractal...

A very lovely and creative vision of winter. Love how the snow makes old things appear new and magical. We don't see these kinds of images in sunny So. California, so it's wonderful to experience new fallen show through your poetic imagery. Wonderful work. Hope you post more. :o) CC

Beautiful verse Susan.You have made me see the other side of winter.The way it makes everything look new.You have a beautiful flowing and eloquent style.Excellent work. V

Very beautiful poem! V

I love how you paint pictures with short phrases, tying them together to finish the whole work. This works very well. I don't live in a snowy place but I can remember and imagine. Thanks

Susan, I am so sorry for not getting here sooner, somehow i missed your comment until now, and Me being Me did not know this Writers Forum even existed here on rosity, but enough about my oversite LOL....This is bueatiful Writing, and takes me back to my days as a youth in snow country, now living here in Florida I haven't seen snow in 20 years. I remember how I could not wait to get dressed and go play in the snow and make Angels and snowmen, boy how the time flies, thanks for this Bueatiful Poem, and a small trip down Memeory Lane........John

aaahh a sister in writing: welcome my friend :) keep up the words, and lets your poems inspire us :)

you have created a beautiful visual wintery scene, i can see it in my mind... sounds wonderful!! thank you & welcome to RR :]

hello Susan, i like so much how u reveal this beautiful play of words, i love the sunlight reflected by the snow as well pure sparkling white as u so well wrote! welcome to the gallery ;0]

Your words paint a beautiful picture in the mind and then I look outside my window and see your vision. Your poem is very touching, reminiscent of days of my youth, when snow was a joy to behold with no worries of driving in it and shoveling it off the walks. Thanks for the trip back!

I just picture your decription in muh mind and your words are beautiful. ~hugzzzzzz~

how wonderful

Beautiful prose that conjures up great images.

I,too, love winter and snow .... (Snowflakes and women poem) .... You paint a marvelous picture in one's mind .... very creative, yet very succinct.... excellent.

An excellent pen-picture of crystalline peace and serenity.

I remember seeing Winter like this! I was a child then. Thank you.