WIP---MRE 001A MECH WARRIOR--WIP by zapper1977
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No AI - This artwork was created entirely by hand or with traditional digital tools.
Description
Just a test render and hoping for some comments and crit on the wip
thanks for viewing

Comments (11)
My impression is that there's too much colour, which distracts. There's also no clear focus of the image, partly because you've got the colourful woman (looking away) but slightly more central, the grey mech (no colour). I suggest that perhaps you look into techniques for composing an image - I'm sure there's things online, otherwise many traditional art books will cover the subject.
I'm Weird, cuase i Love it this way! Maybe add a bit of "Grimme" to the Pipes & Rust to the Metal Rails... Otherwise, Splendid! Cool POV! Marco
the mech is blue not gray
i like it, cant give you any crit on it though, i think its pretty neat. love all the props in it also
I dig it, but the only crit I can come up with is in good cinematography...don't have your actors look off camera...or if they have to, give them plenty of look space. Other than that great work man! keep it comming :)
The modeling here is terrific. Your POV offers a terrific view of the mechs and the cavernous hangar you've created. I'm not entirely sure I agree with all the colors either, but you could test it in a couple of versions, right? The only thing I really would like to see is more dramatic lighting. :o) Keep us posted, please!
Cool and I love the Point of View....!
Great Job! Very good Pov, colors, modeling... Only point of critic is... the walking mech looks like a mech without balance (his feets)! Have you modeled the woman? Great+
i like the color, the suit is cool and everything else too =P looks good =D
Nice... I (me myself) don't like the green colour in the background... and I would like some more "dirty" surfaces (try some bump- and specular-maps) especially on the mechs... Overall, its a great work...
Zapper great style you have.POV is perfect.The reds and greens are abit too bright I feel but what the f#'k do I know!lol-Your scrolling text got me here-how the heck do ya do it bro!Please tell me-I'll buy you a new Harley if I get rich with the help from your skills too!!