Skytown (Ch.3 Pt.6) by JoeJarrah
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The adventure continues...
Comments (11)
LilMichiganDevil 11:47AM | Thu, 07 April 2022
Fantastic !
miwi 5:00PM | Thu, 07 April 2022
You have created a wonderful picture story, love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
eekdog Online Now! 8:03PM | Thu, 07 April 2022
one of your best pages. interesting panels and story.
CoolDimension 12:32AM | Fri, 08 April 2022
Excellent work and composition!
starship64 1:14AM | Fri, 08 April 2022
Fantastic story!
gaius 2:35AM | Fri, 08 April 2022
CB's advices MUST be followed, all the time ! Wonderful story and images...you're a master where this style of images is concerned.
UteBigSmile 5:35AM | Fri, 08 April 2022
OK Joe what now???? Wonderfully done new illustration!
JoeJarrah 7:49AM | Fri, 08 April 2022
Hopefully not too long to wait for the answer ;)
MollyFootman 10:48AM | Fri, 08 April 2022
Really nice narrative style... some of the speech is laid out in a less intuitive way but I don't think challenging the reader is a bad thing. I really get a kick out of the little automaton's linguistic style: "Sub-optimal sensation regarding present situation", indeed! XD
Thanks for sharing!
Molly
JoeJarrah 1:09PM | Fri, 08 April 2022
Thanks Molly. That's always one of my biggest challenges, given the limited space. The eye intuitively wants to read left to right, but often for a single cell you need to place text at the top and bottom to avoid masking the image... I guess the lesson is to minimise the text, but for volume 3, its proven difficult to capture the dynamic between the principals in images alone. I will look at it again and try to tweak it to make the flow easier; thanks for the keen editorial eye!
BellaDark 10:37AM | Sat, 09 April 2022
These are just so good, Joe, I can totally see this printed and people reading it on the bus home from work (or anywhere else for that matter). This must be a painstaking amount of work, but the effort is so worth it. Amazing! :)
paul_gormley 9:32AM | Mon, 11 April 2022
missed this one, Joe, as no notification of any kind, sigh... love the storyline and cells, this is developing really nicely, and makes more sense of the next one which I saw prior to this. BellaD is right, this is a stunning amount of work.
Flint_Hawk 5:47PM | Tue, 12 April 2022
This is really a cliff hangar!