Fantastic !

You have created a wonderful picture story, love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

one of your best pages. interesting panels and story.

Excellent work and composition!

Fantastic story!

CB's advices MUST be followed, all the time ! Wonderful story and images...you're a master where this style of images is concerned.

OK Joe what now???? Wonderfully done new illustration!

Hopefully not too long to wait for the answer ;)

Really nice narrative style... some of the speech is laid out in a less intuitive way but I don't think challenging the reader is a bad thing. I really get a kick out of the little automaton's linguistic style: "Sub-optimal sensation regarding present situation", indeed! XD

Thanks for sharing!

Molly

Thanks Molly. That's always one of my biggest challenges, given the limited space. The eye intuitively wants to read left to right, but often for a single cell you need to place text at the top and bottom to avoid masking the image... I guess the lesson is to minimise the text, but for volume 3, its proven difficult to capture the dynamic between the principals in images alone. I will look at it again and try to tweak it to make the flow easier; thanks for the keen editorial eye!

These are just so good, Joe, I can totally see this printed and people reading it on the bus home from work (or anywhere else for that matter). This must be a painstaking amount of work, but the effort is so worth it. Amazing! :)

missed this one, Joe, as no notification of any kind, sigh... love the storyline and cells, this is developing really nicely, and makes more sense of the next one which I saw prior to this. BellaD is right, this is a stunning amount of work.

This is really a cliff hangar!