Kyna Page 023 - Switch by LyleAryn
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No, there's no pages missing. I'll be correcting page numbers in the next week, and creating a filler page, to bring this whole project up to a "print" standard. (Even though I'm not really planning on having it printed.)
I still want to follow the standard. As it is, page 19 should be pages 20-21, being a two-page spread. I'll correct numbers in the gallery this week.
I did a panel, and was a little stuck this week, until I realized I needed a transitional page to get me to it. So, here we are. It's a BIT rough - I need to figure out a better way to create curves to connect speech bubbles. But! Learn as I go.
Next week will be tidying, as mentioned. I need to swap out placeholder text on previous pages. Maybe work on the next page. There's a skill I need to learn how to do for the page after that one, so I might just take the week off to learn it. (I need to create some opacity maps to make a dress look torn. Should be a challenge.)
I hope you enjoy! Elu looks really good in that tight leather outfit, don't she? Wait until you see the outfit she'll be getting into next!
~~LA
P.S. Using freebies from Kalhh and Dryjack for this scene, as well as engelchen2009's folding screen. Look through their freebies - they go some good stuff!
Comments (18)
RG19
Well it's looking great!!! 👌
LyleAryn
Thanks! They're going to try and pull the old "bait and switch" maneuver.
Radar_rad-dude
Most wonderful graphics novel page and superb art work and characters! Excellent creativity, my friend! Most excellent results!
LyleAryn
Thanks, RRD! The story continues. A little sllwer, but I'm also writing a novel right now.
starship64 Online Now!
She does look fantastic in that outfit! Nicely done.
LyleAryn
Thanks!
Tracesl
great layout and dialog - excellent
LyleAryn
Thank you. It was nice to get another page done.
Kordouane
Another great job on this page !!
LyleAryn
Thank you very much!
Saby55
Simply fantastic! There are no words, beautiful story 👍🙋♂️
LyleAryn
Thanks! I hope the flirting isn't too heavy-handed.
Koala44
Very good job. bravo
LyleAryn
Thanks!
jdwtrxk
Nice work LyleAryn - good luck with the novel. Structure, structure, structure,,,,
LyleAryn
Indeed! Up to five chapters, and about 13k words for the month. I'll be making some art for it eventually.
Davidvantol
Sweet job !
LyleAryn
Thank you very much! Glad you're reading along.
ikke.evc
Nicely done.
LyleAryn
Thanks!
chasfh
Still with you! This is good stuff!
Now where do we go from here?...
LyleAryn
Fight? Fight!
eekdog Online Now!
interesting and greatly done.
LyleAryn
Thank you, eekdog!
miwi
Super layout and dialog .excellent work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LyleAryn
Thank you!
RodS Online Now!
Looking good indeed. It flows nicely, and your art style is perfect for this.
Oh, those fun bits of page numbering, re-numbering, re-arranging panels, adding fillers, and inserts to make things in the story flow a bit more smoothly... I know where you're coming from, my friend! Now you know why I have only 6 functional brain cells left.. LOL
LyleAryn
Thanks! It don't help that I'm stubborn about print numbering.
anitalee Online Now!
Excellent
LyleAryn
Thank you very much!
STEVIEUKWONDER
Compulsive viewing here. I love what you've done!
LyleAryn
Thank you. That's very kind! The next page is a little more complicated to setup the panel work, but as I was working on it, I realized I needed an intermediate page. I think this works for the story's pacing. At this point, looks like I'll be running longer than originally anticipated. (Not like RodS didn't warn me, lol.)
dakotajaroo
beautifully sexy in her clothes, nice comic board
LyleAryn
What is it about seeing a lady wearing your clothes that is so appealing? In any case, Kyna is definitely having some buttons pushed! Thanks for viewing/commenting!
daggerwilldo
A fine tale and some really lovely graphics. A joy to view and to read.
LyleAryn
Thanks! Next week's page should be a doozy. If I can figure out how to create some nice opacity maps.