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Looks a very cool images my friend!!!Bravissimo!V:DDD.Hugsxx Whylma

Word bubbles? I think you did them well here, I am not sure which is best though. Keep up the good work ! :)

♥ Love it, looks very beautiful & welldone!

Fantastic creation / composition ... Wonderfully done !!!

Good work

looks super my friend, i prefer the othe style of ballons Dan.

Very cool work I think you need to have a final page where the clone shows up and clears him

super cool!! I like these word bubbles!!!

LOL! They got you! Looks like Ranpha is into spanking, lol. Excellent posing Dan. I do like the little pointers you used. They help show who is speaking.

ROTFLMAO!! Oh, this is just priceless, Dan! There's so much here to love - Ranpha with that paddle, Trish and Rico holding him (you), and Melanie's expression - all just perfect! I love the way it ties in with the T.N.A. story - it's kind of a look at what's happening behind the scenes while G4 and Ar are flying back to the warehouse. I kind of prefer the actual word bubbles, but this method works just as well to indicate who is speaking. It works quite well where there's not a lot of detail in the background. Another wonderful page, Dan - I got a good laugh out of this! :-D

I would not want to be in his shoes ! or would I?? I like the word bubbles (with out the actual bubbles)

Fantastic work! Poor James. I like this style of "wordage" but agree with Rod that it could get confusing if there is a lot of background detail. This style certainly looks cleaner and leaves more room for the action. Maybe a compromise. Put a simple highlight box behind this style when you have a busy background.

I think the old style of balloons fits better here. Great story and pix!

Amazing image Dan, excellent composition, marvelous characters and pose, superbly done!

LOL!! fantastic scene and story!! marvellous posing!! BRAVO!

NICE WORK

Is he really in trouble ? :)

Thanks for all the great comments and the feedback, for the next one I'll go back to the good old word bubbles.. and thanks!!

About font in sketch the best way of pro is to make a different bubbles between "talking" and "narrative" and then, just have the best harmonic choice of font. Another trick is to "scan" our own manual font and then, when edited with Fontforge or else, to use it into our work... Beyond this, nice work and hope that James will find a yellow shirt to give a end to the misunderstanding... :-p

LOL! Poor guy. As long as you keep the backgrounds simple, doing the words like this works fine.

haha.. cool,, and I'm with Starship on the speech bubbles, either works for me, but i uess this method , though less obtrusive, does need a clear background.

Excellent work!!!!!!

The poses, expressions, and scenes are splendid!

Great story and idea - could be a little longer..if you want it..About texts I prefer bubbles in the scene, but I also think at times - depending of the image type and so on it looks graphicly better to do the text seperately. Think of working hard with composition,lights, posing, textures etc. and then splash a lot of bubbles into it all?.. But here it works fine.. :o)

Nice story and collage!!! Wonderful work!!!

outstanding poses and composition of the scenes an exciting turn to the story

Amazing amount of detail, I too prefer bubbles with this type of art.

Wonderful story and lovely poses! Very cool!!

At least Ranpha didn't get a chance to use the paddle. Good stuff, Dan!