Narratives by Chipka
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No AI - This artwork was created entirely by hand or with traditional digital tools.
Description
Austere spaces may be read as easily as any book; indeed, books offer a blankness, a bleakness in the shape of bleached pulp, cut into thin and flimsy rectangular planes. One learns of this necessity when one learns literacy. The blank page is what allows words to shape themselves into sensations, colors, moods and characters.
I walk—alone—when contemplating stories. Sometimes, when time and circumstance allow, I walk along the shore of Lake Michigan, listening to shore stories.
I was near the lake, recently. As I walked, I discovered an eccentric preservationist, tending a patch of wild land. I’d known of the wild patch for quite some time. The two-acre grassland preserve is a page of a different sort: no longer blank. It is still unreadable. I cannot speak the language of grass, and so I cannot read it either. Nature, after all, writes Her most interesting tales in the very structure of things that live, grow, and die. There is a story, lurking on the shore of Pratt Beach.
The sands bordering Lake Michigan have their own non-grassy tales to tell as well; and they record things, mark things, but the wind erases such testaments, sometimes as soon as they are written. Birds sign their transient autographs in the miniature dunes. Their footprints are distinct, after all…and they reveal things to anyone who might be able to read them. Humans leave footprints as well: narrative texts as short-lived as those left by birds. I left footprints, and so did the eccentric preservationist walking with me.
The eccentric preservationist told me about the various grasses at home in this part of the Midwestern USA; he described each of them, but never revealed their names. He told me of the trees that will grow, once the grasses have anchored enough sand. He told me of a volunteer…a plant at home in the preserve. A cactus. It grows there (even now) by pure chance. Though native to this region, such a cactus (prickly pear?) now requires human assistance if it is to grow in its native, lake-bordering sand; it must be transplanted and guarded against removal. Such a cactus, when discovered in the wild, is often transported into flowerpots at home in kitchen windows. The cactus I saw, the one pointed out to me had simply grown on its own. It didn’t seem to care that someone might come along, dig it up, and place it in a flower pot in a totally foreign—and perhaps inappropriate—kitchen window
I have forgotten its location.
The cactus (a prickly pear?) is a small, green whisper written on the shore of Lake Michigan. I cannot read its fullest meaning, but I suspect it has something to do with survival, adaptation, stubbornness, and a willingness to live in a half-dehydrated state. I rather like that cactus, though I cannot remember its location. I cannot return to its spot on the beach and read its presence. It doesn’t matter, however. I was able to read (and capture) something else. I saw a thing written in the wind itself, something written in water, in clouds, and in the motion of a woman walking her dog. I saw something else written in the presence of fishermen on a pier, storing their refreshments on the base and in the strut-work of a navigational buoy. I heard the speech of characters, indistinct sounds: the lisping whisper of sand, and the faint slap-slap-slap of waves angling toward the shore. I heard little else, and—for a moment—I simply listened and drew my camera from my pocket. I snapped a picture, of a text as only Nature and circumstance might write it. I captured a bleak narrative, and I rather like the story it implies. Look carefully: the story above is written in wind, water, sand, people and a dog. It’s likely to be a completely different story when you read it again.
As always, thank you for viewing, reading, and commenting, and I hope you’re all having a great weekend.

Comments (23)
Very cool narrative! quite informative as well; for it is the wise man who says I do not know but I wish to unlearn and to learn
wonderful capture ... and Faemike55 said it so well it can't be topped...
I rather like this shot. And I actually do not see it as bleak. If fishermen still find it worthwhile to fish in the great lake, and dog owners enjoy the stroll along its beaches, then surely this is a sign of hope that we still believe that this lake and its world is worth saving. This despite and in defiance of a sky that might grow dark. Of coarse, nature will still sweep away any and all testimates to our efforts to enjoy it and protect it. But at least it will continue to do so. As for the cactus, I believe its story is about stubbornness. Nature is very stubborn. We think we've exiled her from our habitats, only to find her green fingers readily tearing up our 'asphalt of freedom' just as soon as the tar solidifies. The cactus is actively rebelling against our invasion and corruption of its universe.
Lovely...Always enjoy read your stuff my friend :)
I love how you describe your relationship with the world around you, and explain that the environment is always in motion and as each moment affects us in different ways, changing our relationship with the universe. As for your picture is really beautiful, a world condensate, describing the nature, its inhabitants, and how man has transformed both.
It's an old story. I can tell, because the page has yellowed and the story is timeless. This could be fifty years ago, or seventy-five, or next month, and nothing would have changed. It's the splendid, unique solitude of the space where worlds collide, albeit gently. The lap and splash of water on a beach ... the only decision to be made is "how far?" Story and image are both just right, my friend.
Engrossing words and the image is perfect for purpose.
A super capture complimented with wonderful writing my friend. God Bless.
Well written Chip.
Excellent composition. Great mood piece, the color seems apocalyptic to me. Your narrative reminded me that, while I was recovering from recent surgery, I had not watered the plants in my meager garden. After several months I checked on them and theywere all doing quite well without me. Nature takes care of its own if we will just get out of the way.
thought provoking piece, admirably illustrated.
I'm drawn to that subdued and pearlescent light on the water and the structure on the pier; it almost seems to caress everything it touches. A beautiful narrative and shot, Chip!
excellent photo and writings...you notice things that others never even see...you are a kindred spirit... chills and thrills look for another bird without the frame... :)
Fine photo & writing. I like the quality of light in this image & especially that large shadow in the sand...
Fine photography indeed.
Wonderful narrative of life and a great shot full of atmosphere
Superb shot, Chip. I like the atmosphere you've captured and the monotone works well.
magnificent work
Wonderful minimalist shot.:)
A superb image and a wonderful tone.
I like the tones and the most the atmosphere in this shot. Awesome work.
Very well done. I love it. 5+!
Quite an evocative scene, my friend. There is indeed a book of stories here, if we could learn to read it. It will spark a different scenario each time it is viewed. Well done. Warm regards ( well about 2C at the moment ) from Glasgow, Scotland, John.