Continuing my attempts at branching out my style, I'm trying out revisions of the earlier ship. Unfortunately this reminds me far too much of the Centauri ships on Babylon 5, which has had a huge influence on my style, I think. Still, there's things about this that I like so I'm curious about how you guys feel about this one. Feel free to be brutal here, I'm experimenting so criticisms/suggestions are at least as important as praise. For now, I should probably think about dinner, then I'm going to try some additional changes to this one, as I've had a few ideas as I fooled around with this one.