Emberglow: Touching Galley Proof -Pt1 by dphoadley
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Description
This is a reformat of my 'touching' installment. Instead of th eoriginal installment's 9 scene renders, this has now been divided into two parts, with six scenes each, so as to create more balance between text and image.
Please note the three extra scenes, all of which is in this 1st part, and also some revisions to the text itself.
Comments and critiques will be most welcome, especially as pertains whether there are enough images for the amount of text, or whether more images are necessary for the flow of story.
dph
Comments (12)
ממש מרשים! שהשמחה תהיא בלבך!!! ממני ליאור
Are you looking to print this David?
Yes, someday, after I've worked all the bugs out, and corrected all my spelling mistakes! Yes. dph
It's looking very good!
Nice composition!
Fabulous work!!!!
I'd like it better without all the decorations. Nice scenes, Dave.
Great work - I like the layout - excellent work on the images
Very good work so far.
That's quite enthralling dialogue ... I'm guessing they'll get down to it fairly soon, then. Well done!
Very good.....
Fabulous work erland