A Few People Cry by vaggabondd
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Standing in a mist
On a cloudy, cloudy day
My soul is drenched
And I am tired
I have ran so many miles
And I am right back where I started
You think you can change
Who you are
But you are wrong
And everyone you know
Is there to remind you
I remember watching a coin toss
Thinking there was a winner
And a loser
But there are no winners
Only survivors
The finish line is a 1,000 miles away
And no one ever finishes
They run until they die
And if you are lucky
A few people cry
Comments (16)
That touches a nerve excellent writing Randy hugs lou x
Outstanding work! Well Done!
definitly touching, Randy, and gets me to an inner rebellion at the same time, my little self struggling to see the positive sides and alimenting the small plant of hope that there will be a brighter light another day...
Oh man, this one sent chills down my spine! This really hits close to home. One of your best.
Fabulous writing my dear friend, just love this!
The truth in purest form.Wonderful poem Randy !Stay who you are ..it's all you can be sure of .....
I hope the finish line isnt to soon..Excellent Poetry my friend..
Very good writing, Randy!
A very moving and insightful poem. VERY true too. Thanks for sharing.
I read something a long time ago. "No matter how hard you try, you're just passing time until you die. A gloomy thought.
Wow so powerful and well said i am so impressed by ur words and i can see a heart i have never seen in any man before keep up the good work.
So true so right Randy
Wonderful poem Randy!!
Your words are beautiful and bleak! Excellent writing!
Good one Randy...
This really is one of your best works yet Randy. I think this has touched a nerve with most of us here. Beautifully crafted.