The Closer you get.. a different Perspective by tennesseecowgirl
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I was left a comment I wasn't sure on so I wrote and asked about it and they gave me their advice, what they thought might improve my photo, here is part of what he wrote back to me
I was just talking about the coloring. I liked the coloring approach in that image. However, by coloring only a corner, my eyes were directed there instead of the barn. I think that by adding additional color touches around the image, the observation experience will improve...
so Osvaldo this is for you, with my thanks. I hope this version is a bit better, see it does pay to give constructive criticism, and not just leave rude remarks. And in reference to my comment yesterday to receiving a yawn to my work, please know I am all for anyone suggesting a way to improve my work, and I have left plenty of suggestions on others work, so feel free to to suggest, critique, advise, offer techniques. I can take it. lol
Osvaldo's gallery
Here is a comment I loved.... it gave me a smile,
You are the barn paparazzi!!! GREAT stuff Lynell!!! David
yes David I guess I am guilty of that LOL
Previous Barn
The Closer you Get Thank you all for supporting me you all rock... hugss
You've got a friend in Me
The Closer you Get Thank you all for supporting me you all rock... hugss
You've got a friend in Me
Comments (57)
Very nice image! Good composition. :)
Very nice scene. I like this version better! Well done.
Hmmm. I think I have to agree -- it is improved this way. Kudos to both you and Osvaldo!
Cool camera angle !! great Image [^________^] Cheers, Roger
cool view onto the building! impressive grey and woodwork! ;o)
Nice selective coloring! I would not change a thing!
I think its great!!
I agree about the coloring comment - prefer this one; the blue and bit of rest/red balance each other, and better both set of the silver gray of the wood.
Excellent texture and perspective photo, very well presented, well done...
I really love these barn shots and postwork, very good indeed.
I do like this a little better. It is way more fun to leave rude remarksthan to have to think of something clever to say....lol
nice!!!
?? YO VEO LA MISMA, PERO IGUALMENTE ME GUSTA. FELICIDADES.
THis barn looks colossal! Excellent capture and presentation!
As a photographer the first one was ok, I thought you did well?...Oh well, I am with Ray, don't change things you and many other (Phootographers) seem happy with?
It's a superb composition!!!
Fantastic work.
Oh yawn...just kidding lol..I like this one the colors do take your eyes around the photograph. Plus I just love old barns..
wonderful shot .. and we all a little bit paparazzi , or ?? ;))))))
wonderful are both warm hugs, Linda
great view...
I like all three versions. Each is unique in its colorization and personality. I love your photos. :)
LIKE A OLD FARM !!! I LOVE IT !!
This one seems to be better!
it does make a marked imprrovement to the whole composition I would not have thought of using a colored frame to give a picture more color and balance execllent suggestion Osvaldo.
I looked at the previous and this one...I see what you were trying to do. I see nothing wrong with them...it's fun to experiment with filters..
great work!!!
super shot
Great work on both images. however, as it was pointed to me, do it for yourself and not others. as for me suggesting how you can improve your photos, would be like me telling RGUS or Gizmee how to do nudes - ain't gonna happen cause I can't match that quality, like your photos have.
Great strong shapes make for a successful composition