Drifting Off by auntietk

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Jun 02, 2009

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DRIFTING OFF I'm off to bed To dream of you Smiling in my sleep I will feel your touch Hear your voice Your joyous laughter Echoing in my heart Thinking of Conversations We have had And topics We have yet to Explore I will drift off Sleeping I will come to you Finding my way Along the jet stream You'll be easy to see Your heart shines And calls my name .......... Title page created in ArtRage and Photoshop Font is Caeldera .......... The Writer's Gallery has asked for banner submissions! CLICK HERE to see what they're looking for. Seriously! Check it out!

Comments (22)

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barbdennist

11:11PM | Tue, 02 June 2009

Very touching and personal. I almost feel like I'm intruding on your private space. Sweet dreams to you and your special friend.

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beachzz

11:18PM | Tue, 02 June 2009

sigh i know about this and isn't it wonderful?!

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Faemike55

12:08AM | Wed, 03 June 2009

Very beautiful and sentimental! Well done

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Katraz

1:12AM | Wed, 03 June 2009

Beautifull

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helanker

1:51AM | Wed, 03 June 2009

A very sweet poem Tara.

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durleybeachbum

2:16AM | Wed, 03 June 2009

Marvellously evocative!

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flavia49

2:18AM | Wed, 03 June 2009

so nice!

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artaddict2

2:37AM | Wed, 03 June 2009

nice!

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countess8

2:57AM | Wed, 03 June 2009

beautiful well done

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jo_dis

6:10AM | Wed, 03 June 2009

A splendid dreamscape and lovely poetic thoughts

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lucindawind

8:02AM | Wed, 03 June 2009

fantastic poem ..just beautiful

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moonrancher

8:17AM | Wed, 03 June 2009

A lovely moment of reflaction you have captured. Excellent work.

PD154

8:26AM | Wed, 03 June 2009

Very thought provoking, this can apply to a lot of people sweetie, well done.

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ontar1

9:34AM | Wed, 03 June 2009

Beautiful poem, excellent work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Meisiekind

2:09PM | Wed, 03 June 2009

WOW Tara - how deeply this is touching me!!! I hear you and can only echo each word! :)

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jocko500

3:47PM | Wed, 03 June 2009

wonderful

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hipps13

4:39PM | Wed, 03 June 2009

wonderful words, Tara May warm hugs that smile, Linda Kaye

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babuci

6:36PM | Wed, 03 June 2009

Na this is realy nice and so warm. Well done Tara.

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elfin12u

7:55PM | Wed, 03 June 2009

Beautiful poem!!, Reminds me of when we first met, she lived about two hours away, and we could only see each other every other weekend. During the time in between we'd talk on the phone each night, until the battery would go dead on my cordless. I would then drift off to sleep, thinking thoughts like this. Thank you for the step back!

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Merrylee

11:08AM | Thu, 04 June 2009

Nice!

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anaber

4:45PM | Thu, 04 June 2009

Wonderful poem.Very emotional and touching.

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anahata.c

6:06AM | Sat, 20 June 2009

catching up on past absences...this is lovely tara, and so very pure, I mean it's the stream of friendship without any interference...from a person who understands that "friends" are family, and family is the heart. Fine division of lines, each one a breath of feeling; and the last stanza is beautiful, flying to a beloved person on the jetstream, above the normal streams of air where feelings glide unencumbered. Beautiful. Lucky friend that gets to be on the other end of this...but then you'd say you were lucky too, as true friendship is two ways...