I Wish I Could Say Thank You by vaggabondd
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Description
Tossing and turning
On my favorite old bench
I wonder the streets
Looking for a few more penny presses
To add another layer against the cold
When a set of head lights
Send me softly into the night
I hear birds singing
The sun is not so much light
As it is warmth
There are fields of corn
On both sides of me
Way off down the road
I can see you waving to me
You are young like when we first met
When I lean my head back
And take a big breath
I can smell hot chicken
And a peach pie
You are wearing that big spring hat
You love so much
And that thin summer dress
I love so much
You are singing me home
Then I can’t see you anymore
And I can barely hear your voice
Coming from underneath the willow tree
Then you are gone altogether
I can feel the cold
Creeping back into my bones
When I hear somebody say
We got him back
I wish I could say thank you
I am not sure if I like this one or not, it might be a little to hokie pokie
Comments (8)
I like it, it is different, a different pov. Curious, what does hokie pokie mean? I do not know. I attempted to look it up. I could not find a definition for it anywhere… Please, share. Thanks Randy
Could be a movie--interesting idea!!
No, it's not hokey, it's very good. Beautifully clear imagery, good pacing ... nicely done!
I adore it. It is different and I love different. It has two different moods, clashing together to make it amazing. You did a great job on this one.
I agree with auntietk, it's not hokey at all...well done
Very nice Randy!!
wonderful work, Randy warm hug, Linda
"Send me softly into the night I hear birds singing The sun is not so much light As it is warmth " Sensibilidade e alma, um poeta em sua essência, aplausos (5)