Unsaid, Undone by beachzz
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Unsaid, Undone
Words unsaid
Deeds undone
Pretending
Unhearing
Neverending
It goes on and on
And on
Don’t hear it
Don’t say it
Let it be
Won’t make it
Untrue
It goes on and on
And on
One day
Words said
Deeds done
Heard it said it
All true
The end
11/10/08
Comments (18)
FINAL-to-the-point> .
Excellent!!!
No holds barred...Nicely put Maz...on a funnyside sounds like a regular Friday night out in my old days :)
Attempted procrastination is not a crime manana.
Thanks 4 sharing such intriguing and warm piece, love it.
How true your words, Marilyn. Love the sea capture to go with the narrative.
Yes I can relate to that I think, more so now, things left undone, I try can't do it, call someone in they do it instead. Excellent bit of prose Marylin. Bravo!!!!!
Excellent!
super
Never put off until tomorrow what you can do today. Or is it the other way around? I like that apocalyptic reddish image you've put on display, M.
Exactly. Just so. Just right.
Great poem...lovely pic!
Beautifully done...ah, I love poetic truth, especially when it is directly to the point like this! Great work, and I love the image with it.
Beautiful!
Excellent work Marylin
beautiful words my friend. and I love the picture you picked to go with this poem. You are quite the poet my friend
I like this warm hug, Linda
Very true words and beautiful photo. Been there done that. HUGS