Obivion page206 by midnight_stories
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Description
this was one of those pages that didn't go to plan and nearly went to the scrap bin. But I have to keep it moving. The age old fight between youth and experience continues next page. Thanks for the great support.
SCRIPT:
I've told you not
To use the image
Machine! And you’re
Not going anywhere.
You're not
The boss
Of me.
He has to be
Saved. We can't
Stand here and do
Nothing.
He's going to
Be all right. Have
Some faith in him.
Comments (12)
Nice work!
I like the story's movement. and the graphic are great as usual.
story is moving well and the graphics are great
The "Your not the boss of me" line nearly made me choke LOL! Frame one is particularly good looking I think.
Super on the graphics, and the story is doing super good, keeps me coming back. I wonder who is going to win this disagreement. We all know youth has no patience. The shadowing on frame 3's face make it very hard to see her expression.
Interesting in that you supply the dialog as how you wrote it. I usually write the actual dialog last and use the final images to inspire the final draft. I really like the pacing and staging. Good color and nicely presented special effects, too! Always a pleasure to read this.
Yes, quite nice work. Now, for the rest of the story? You grabbed my interest.
Cool style. Fantastic graphics.
Fantastic...!!!!
Those aura-like lighting FX are out of this world!!! The crispness and clarity of both lines and colors are reaching a new level in this page - and story-wise, only your story's uniqe combo of hi-tech and religion could make it seem just RIGHT that the man-in-the-suit talks about faith, even though he is standing in the middle of a scientific/technological hub! Top notch!
Superb colors and POVs in yourpanels. Excellent addition to your story...
Hmm interesting how he "knows" he going to be alright.