oblivion page 156 by midnight_stories
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This was about the time when I totally got lost with my colors, in the next three page or so, you’ll how I attempt to change the color scheme, and fail terribly. I’ve not changed it so I can look back and learn. One of the biggest mistakes I’ve made, is having my foreground and background colors to close together. It hard to distinguish the characters from the background. I even tried a color wheel but didn’t find the solution, so for the beginner this is something you should keep in mind at all time. Well I don’t like this page at all, but got to keep going, thank for the great comment on the preview page, and more to come.
Midnight
Comments (8)
Ahhh, don't be so hard on yourself. True enough about colors and isolating fore and back grounds to better distinguish the characters. But the dialog is great. The backdrop layer could be contrasted down in PS for darkness sake. But only slightly. The frame by frame progression is still superb. And the colors are vivid enough to warrent viewer's closer scrutiny. That's what its all about!
I might agree with you on that last frame as far as contrasting between characters and background would help. I'm sure this is always a learning process. But the fact you do such amazing stuff and are still trying to improve upon it is certainly encouraging.
its a great comic keep it up
Hey nobody's perfect. I agree with RBlue and dcatwell, sure this isn't your best page but the great story is still there and I look foward to more!
Great story amd coloring, I really didn'y have any trouble with seeing the differences. I'll be back for more.
Great humor on this page! The colors don't look too bad to me... my favorite color scheme so far was the blue building in hell.
I like it like it is. The way you composed each frame does work and makes the figures distinguishable fine for me.
Don't be too hard on yourself!
Plus, think about it, if one or a few images are a duller than others, it will help making more spectacular contrast in the next ones!
Might lower the contrast tension and make the raise more dramatic. :)
I'll never understand how you can produce such gorgeous pages at such astounding speed. Manga does it by largely eliminating backgrounds, but your backgrounds are a visual feast every time. Either way, keep'em comin'!!!