oblivion page53 by midnight_stories
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Sorry this is the last one for the week, I had problems with the shower scene and her bed room doesn
Comments (10)
those are very true words my friend. excellent comic genre you got goin on there!!
Great work, but... on the last picture I've got the impression that her face impression & posing doesn't fit to her words. If I want somebody to stay my posing should be an invitation. MAy be she put her hand on his upper arm and give him a more typical wince face. It just an idea, not more !
Very nice art and words!
I have to agree with what has been said: true words... :) Also, I loved his expression on the first panel... Your expressions rules!! lol Anyway, keep it up! :D
Great comic - I like the scenes. Maybe if David has sex he'll sleep for once.:)
Well, you ARE getting mushy, keep it up, not every storyteller, especially male storytellers, have the guts to get mushy. Nicely choreographed fight scene in the previous pages, seemed to me like David was holding back, or that guy would have looked much worse! Can't help wondering why David remembers the damsel-in-distress situation in his deja-vu moment; this guy's more than just a guy next door. Good luck to the lady if she falls for this guy (or already has) - she'll need it; David's life won't be nice and quiet and ordinary, I'm afraid ;o)
Great Job Midnight... The pages just keep getting better and better. and the story line... WOW. A+A+
Excellent -- she's fallen head over heels for David! What happens next?
Simply beautiful. 5+
Trying to describing love at first sight is hard, but I think you did it perfectly here! Excellent writing there my friend!