Excellent as usual!!bravissimo!V:DDD.Hugsxx

Hohoho... So, we are introduced to Clark Kent's father... lol Very good indeed, my friend.. Keep it up! :D

Nice work. Love that Dirty Harry gun, looks like a lean, mean SOB.

The angles you used here are awesome. Like the gun too. You have some awesome stuff. This should make the stands, otherwise alot of people will miss a great read!

Once again, as always... awesome... Now please don't take this to heart, but one thing did stand out. Frame 1... His fingers on the trigger, and one finger inside the gun guard. Hey, Nobody is perfect... Yet your brillance comes very close. Keep up the good work, I always strive to see your next page, If my comments hurt, I'm sorry, but always remember this my friend... You are my favorite artist here, so I hope that helps.

Man I was hoping no one was going to see that so Ill just have to be more careful. But its ok to point things out to me its the only way I can improve, and thats what I try to do to you guys when I comment on your pages so you can improve to. So go ahead make a comment LOL.

okay here's a comment - wonderful intoduction of David - let's see where this is going...keep it up.

Okay, here's another constructive comment: what happened to your awesome proofreader? Spelling seems to be the only flaw to me--artwork fantastic as always. Peace out, happygal

I have to say it looks good. I like the pov also.

Awesome stuff. Like happygal said, with a proofreader, this would be publishable gold. Seriously, you get to an issure finishing point, take it to a comic-con and push it at some publishers. -Mike >8]

Guys if there are spelling mistakes point them out and I'll fix them up I need all the help I can get in that department