Thoughts by yomah
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Every night I lay in bed
with all my thoughts still left unsaid
Above me I hear your restless sleep,
pray sweet dreams I wish you'd keep
You're in pain, you think no one can hear,
I'd pull you up close, if I could only get near
Your eyes tear, I'm right here, to make the pain go away
but you're in your bed, and I'm in my head, here we stay
It will be alright
we'll make it through another night.
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I'm tired. Not sure whaat I have left, the above words are crap but the thought's there. I cna't get the words out in the right order, I keep f#ckn' things up.
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Comments (6)
awesome work but i think you have uploaded it twice
You may not like the poem, but I think it is beautiful and I understand it. Your painting is also beautiful. You capture a certain look of confused sadness. Together they make me think of the struggle between love, fear, and unending forgiveness. Your work is very powerful yo.
I like the write up, I dont think it is bad at all. I know the feeling, as well. Another beautiful girl, you always capture the beaty perfectly :-)
very beautiful she is..such haunting eyes..I feel as though I could reach out and touch....and the deep longing of words...sigh..
I guess it really is s#itty. The girl is Sara, cleaned up, without makeup. If the resemblance is missing it just goes to show how much a f#ckup artist I am. The pitifully whining words were my piss-ass attempt to describe my emotions as I lay in bed hearing Sara cry herself to sleep. She doesn't know I can know, her sorrow drips from the ceiling and soaks my sheets engulfing me in it's misery. We share the same barely beating heart of shame. Like a predator who can sense weakness or innocence in a child, I can feel her anger, shame and sorrow. I only wish I could bring her to a place were the crying isn't secret anymore, were I can bear her weight and carry her as long as it takes.
so beautiful. and full of love. and your words, even though you think are crap, touch me deeply.