Life by vaggabondd
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Description
Drum
Drum
Drum
Everyday it beats
Stronger
Closer
Pounding in my ear
Wearing me down
chewing me up
Spiting me out
Everyday
It pulls me closer to the grave
The funny thing is
It has beat me up
So bad
For so long
I
Comments (3)
Razor42
Drum Drum Drum It beats on ever stronger everyday its longer The only thing we have to fear is fear it'self - nameless, unreasoning, unjustified, terror which paralyzes needed efforts to convert retreat into advance." Be a rock and those you care about will find shelter in you.
SusiQ
Don't be afraid of living, the life that is 'wearing you down' is just shaping your soul into something beautiful. Interesting poem.
88
Nice continuity... nice rhythm! Every line is "Drum"-- concise, one beat. You are giving a beautiful voice to many who don't know what to say. You remind me of an old, dear friend of mine who was experimented on by Dr. Mengele.