LIFE SUCKS by vaggabondd

Writers • (none) • posted on Apr 04, 2006

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vaggabondd

1:43AM | Tue, 04 April 2006

I WAS JUST HAVING A LITTLE FUN SEEING IF I COULD DISCRIBE A DAY 2 WORDS AT A TIME. I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT I KIND OF LIKE THIS ONE. LOL

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digitalgrey

5:08AM | Tue, 04 April 2006

I like the idea of a list but it needs work, for things like this it's beat to scrap a rhyming structure to give yourself more freedom. Again I like the idea.

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TallPockets

1:05PM | Tue, 04 April 2006

A little e.e. cummings-esque? Well done!

Gumbie

10:49PM | Tue, 04 April 2006

love it!!!

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SusiQ

6:18AM | Thu, 06 April 2006

Oh yes! You have created the picture of a perfect stuck-in-the-rut life! Well done.

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femalien

3:53AM | Sat, 08 April 2006

Great work! And darn true, too.

chill09

11:58PM | Mon, 17 April 2006

I like this very much-a great expression of the boring rut for those of us who feel this at times-probably more often than not. Now on a more humorous note-Pop tarts and tv dinners? Have you considered a nutritional suppliment? Vitamin deficiency can depress the mood. LOL Good work and I applaud your efforts to explore!

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