Kyna Page 6 - Meeting by LyleAryn ()
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So, after a lot of time spent trying to figure out what Kyna is doing, I ended up with this.
She's off to meet with a contact about a job. He's a pretty friendly sort - owner of a bar. This will be the mechanism for her meeting the next characters. It's not a fancy page, but I think it will do. I spent WAY too much time on the tavern sign... lol. I'll have to upload the image I made for it later.
Numbered as page 6, since the last page is meant to be a double.
I'm pretty much sticking to a print standard for this, out of some stubbornness, even though it would be presented in a digital format. Call me crazy.
I figure a whole page talking to the Goblin, then go from there. The thing is, that goblin is SLOW to maneuver. I'm not sure why, but loading him makes the scene GLACIAL. But... it needs a few more panels with him in it, so it can't be helped.
I actually did that panel first. Then the panel with the boy and the wall, and the bottom-left last.
Image Comments (9)
Saby55 () 11:44PM | Thu, 25 February 2021
WOW ... Gorgeous cartoon ... Wonderful creation ... Great job !!!👍🙋♂️
miwi () 8:55AM | Fri, 26 February 2021
You have created a wonderful picture story,excellent done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Darkglass () 1:34PM | Fri, 26 February 2021
Coming along very nicely...another quality set of panels...top work..!!
daggerwilldo () Online Now! 9:55PM | Fri, 26 February 2021
A most enjoyable view. The characters are very intriguing.
After a lot of going back and forth, I've decided there will be a single word on this page. Taking a page from Sergio Leone's book, and going minimalist with the opening dialoge. She walks into the pub, and just says, "Work?"
Then a shot of the Goblin, stroking his chin, and we can move on to the meat of the story. All I really need to do here is establish that she is hired for the job she'll be undertaking. At least, I hope it does enough.
RodS () 1:54PM | Sun, 28 February 2021
It's really looking good! All the panels look great and consistent with the style. It's far too easy to get hung up on one small detail in these scenes. Happens to me all the time.
Been going back and forth on little dialogue to more dialogue on it. Settled on a happy medium when I realized that the characters needed a bit more than I was giving them to actually feel like the characters. I also redid the bottom right panel entirely, lol.
Now working on the next page, which should be enough to lead into the action!