Kyna Page 003 by LyleAryn ()
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Here is page 03. I did all three in the same day, lol. I've been busy, or else I would have uploaded before now.
In the first panel, I'm thinking a thought bubble or squarebox to the effect of "Guess I'm awake."
I'm thinking a sound effect in the bottom panel. "Click!" as she sets the arm in place.
So far, The pictures are coming clearer than the words. I'm used to writing novel, not Graphic novels, lol. Reducing it down to just a few lines on a page is quite a challenge. Besides, I think the pictures are saying a lot by themselves, so for now I'd be happy with a minimalist approach until there's someone to talk to.
QUESTION: Anybody know of a good belt-and-sheath setup for Genesis 2 female? I know YOU know how much of a pain the Daz catalog is to browse, and I wasn't having much luck looking through the renderosity one, either. It's too bad this model don't come with a sheath, but I think I can adapt one for a G8 set well enough. I'd like a good belt that fits/had good adjustments and can attach as sheath to. Since I foresee a lot of panels of her wearing the sword, it would be nice to get something fairly simple NOW, rather than struggle with it all the time.
Though I suppose I can do a temp solution until a better one is found.
Image Comments (10)
chasfh () 4:47AM | Mon, 22 February 2021
Nice work indeed!
Took a quick scout around, but can't see anything to fit the bill for G2.
Darkglass () 1:58PM | Mon, 22 February 2021
Wonderful work...quality set of panels...you really nailed and refined the style on this page...!!
BellaDark () Online Now! 2:37PM | Mon, 22 February 2021
Wonderful panel here, Lyle, it tells such a great story. I think putting the effects in would be awesome, just like a comic. Great graphic work. :)
RodS () Online Now! 8:29PM | Mon, 22 February 2021
I'm really digging this style. The simple backgrounds and not a lot of details (look who's talking... LOL) suit this style perfectly.
Just my opinion, but with this minimalist style, I think keeping the text to an absolute minimum - and letting the images tell most of the story is the way to go. A small "click" as she sets the arm in place would work fine. Otherwise, the images say all that needs to be said. The way you have her posed in all the panels reads perfectly. To me, at least.
starship64 () 1:40AM | Tue, 23 February 2021
This is fantastic work. I agree with RodS; with this style of art you should aim for minimum text.
daggerwilldo () Online Now! 11:55PM | Tue, 23 February 2021
A lovely and very fun departure from your other fine style. It is very enjoyable watching you play.