Kyna Page 024 - Bait by LyleAryn ()
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Page 024, and done a couple days early! I've got a ton of stuff to learn for the next few pages, so I wanted to finish this one earlier. I'm also going to be really cracking on my book this weekend in an mad-dash attempt to get caught up on the writing challenge. So, best to get it out of the way!
Don't worry though. I'll still be rendering about every day. Once I get done writing today, I'll be doing another pinup. (Apart from the one I'm about to post.)
I wanted to thank everybody that's been reading along. I really appreciate it!
Time for the plan to be set in motion! Today I also put all the page numbers to rights, and fixed a couple pages with incorrect text. Should be all copacetic now. I might end up redoing this one, and I think I might need to outline the two smaller panels with a black line on the outside of the white line. It's a small change, but I think that will make it better. Saw this sort of layout in another comic and wanted to give it a try. As for the sizes of the boxes, I attempted to follow the Golden Ratio. Not sure if I was successful.
Image Comments (13)
RodS () Online Now! 9:46PM | Thu, 15 April 2021
Great page - looks like things are about to get intense!
"A ton of stuff to learn for the next pages..." God, does that sound familiar.... If I had a dollar for every time I've asked myself, "OK.... How the hell am I gonna do this...?" 😉 That's what keeps it new and interesting, though..
Kordouane () 4:01AM | Fri, 16 April 2021
It is superb, it must be difficult to do this kind of work, I admire !!
STEVIEUKWONDER () 4:14AM | Fri, 16 April 2021
Like the finish here. It's really interesting to look at how it has turned out!
daggerwilldo () Online Now! 12:31AM | Sat, 17 April 2021
A most fun story. Very creative writing and graphics content. A fine job.