Kyna Page 023 - Switch by LyleAryn ()
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No, there's no pages missing. I'll be correcting page numbers in the next week, and creating a filler page, to bring this whole project up to a "print" standard. (Even though I'm not really planning on having it printed.)
I still want to follow the standard. As it is, page 19 should be pages 20-21, being a two-page spread. I'll correct numbers in the gallery this week.
I did a panel, and was a little stuck this week, until I realized I needed a transitional page to get me to it. So, here we are. It's a BIT rough - I need to figure out a better way to create curves to connect speech bubbles. But! Learn as I go.
Next week will be tidying, as mentioned. I need to swap out placeholder text on previous pages. Maybe work on the next page. There's a skill I need to learn how to do for the page after that one, so I might just take the week off to learn it. (I need to create some opacity maps to make a dress look torn. Should be a challenge.)
I hope you enjoy! Elu looks really good in that tight leather outfit, don't she? Wait until you see the outfit she'll be getting into next!
P.S. Using freebies from Kalhh and Dryjack for this scene, as well as engelchen2009's folding screen. Look through their freebies - they go some good stuff!
Image Comments (18)
Radar_rad-dude () 1:00AM | Sat, 10 April 2021
Most wonderful graphics novel page and superb art work and characters! Excellent creativity, my friend! Most excellent results!
starship64 () Online Now! 1:50AM | Sat, 10 April 2021
She does look fantastic in that outfit! Nicely done.
jdwtrxk () 6:44AM | Sat, 10 April 2021
Nice work LyleAryn - good luck with the novel. Structure, structure, structure,,,,
chasfh () 8:22AM | Sat, 10 April 2021
Still with you! This is good stuff!
Now where do we go from here?...
RodS () Online Now! 4:39PM | Sat, 10 April 2021
Looking good indeed. It flows nicely, and your art style is perfect for this.
Oh, those fun bits of page numbering, re-numbering, re-arranging panels, adding fillers, and inserts to make things in the story flow a bit more smoothly... I know where you're coming from, my friend! Now you know why I have only 6 functional brain cells left.. LOL
STEVIEUKWONDER () Online Now! 3:55AM | Sun, 11 April 2021
Compulsive viewing here. I love what you've done!
Thank you. That's very kind! The next page is a little more complicated to setup the panel work, but as I was working on it, I realized I needed an intermediate page. I think this works for the story's pacing. At this point, looks like I'll be running longer than originally anticipated. (Not like RodS didn't warn me, lol.)
daggerwilldo () Online Now! 12:10AM | Mon, 12 April 2021
A fine tale and some really lovely graphics. A joy to view and to read.