Kyna Page 001 - A Bad Beginning... by LyleAryn ()
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So here it is. Page One! Wooo!
I think I'm going to leave it without text. I'm liking it like this. Our hero, losing her arm. Probably left for dead. Another body in the foreground... what must be going on?
And I've already got an idea for the next page, which means the story is starting to take hold. THAT is the best part.
So, lemme know what you think. I'll update if I decide to add some text.
It's not the best beginning for Kyna, but it IS a beginning...
Image Comments (10)
daggerwilldo () Online Now! 9:46PM | Sat, 20 February 2021
Yikes..there is a tale to be told here. Do continue please, and I hope someone makes it out alive.
chasfh () Online Now! 8:05AM | Sun, 21 February 2021
Dark... Very dark... Let's hope things improve for the poor lass!
Darkglass () 1:24PM | Sun, 21 February 2021
Fabulous opening page...you got my attention...superb work and imagery...!!
RodS () 3:29PM | Sun, 21 February 2021
Indeed - a most 'disarming' way to start an adventure! (sorry, that was awful, but I couldn't resist...). I really love the look of this - a great beginning. With the nebulous and starry background it suggests a much deeper story awaiting beyond Kyna's painful encounter here. The image itself says everything that needs to be said, I think.
And it WILL continue to take hold... Stories are like that - especially when you're the one telling them.
Which reminds me - I need to get my butt back to work....