Girls From T.N.A: Breitlenger Jar: Ch 7 Page 14 by RodS ()
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Here's Page 14 as things ramp up for the Girls!
Again (and I know I've said this many times), I'm working on getting these pages done sooner. There's a ton of stuff about to happen, and I really need to get on the ball!
I'm still working on a number of things, including this story - and my reader base seems to be growing, so I must be doing something right. I just need to do it faster! I'm planning on recording another 'Behind The Scenes' in the next week or so as well.
Anyway, Thanks for your visits, comments and support! You all are what keeps me going! 👍
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Image Comments (30)
zaqxsw () 7:47PM | Tue, 02 February 2021
Outstanding work as always... looking forward to the next action packed installment!
bakapo () Online Now! 9:38PM | Tue, 02 February 2021
Wow, that's some good action and drama. I love the lighting of the roof scenes and the fire of the explosion. Lots of cool background details make your storyboards so neat. Good job on this exciting chapter, I look forward to more.
mtdana () 11:51PM | Tue, 02 February 2021
Surgical strike - very well executed rescue !!! Great continuation on your series RodS!!!
UteBigSmile () 7:29AM | Wed, 03 February 2021
Your new images are wonderfully done, have nice Evening, stay vigilant and healthy!
goldie () Online Now! 10:12AM | Wed, 03 February 2021
Exciting installment, Rod! Excellent scene work and dialogue. I look forward to when those stupid kidnappers finally understand what real pain is :)
Darkglass () 10:36AM | Wed, 03 February 2021
Another impressive set of panels....top notch in every aspect...!!!!
Faemike55 () 10:42AM | Wed, 03 February 2021
Outstanding work on this page. The buildup of the action is fantastic.
eekdog () Online Now! 11:47AM | Wed, 03 February 2021
A high impact page Rod. totally super action on each panel and awesome fx. a super side kick by Kinnie, Tina enjoyed that one. looks like a lot of time was used creating this marvelous page, but still wonder where that sniper is and if she will fulfill her contract or jump over and join the T.N.A. group and help eliminate these A holes. awesome job on this story my friend.. much enjoyed it. 5+++
twingo () 12:52PM | Wed, 03 February 2021
Always had a softspot for powerful babes, great looking story my friend
STEVIEUKWONDER () 2:05PM | Wed, 03 February 2021
Impeccable art a real pleasure to view. Lovely work Rod! Stay safe my friend!
miwi () 3:21PM | Wed, 03 February 2021
Your imagination is fantastic, again a very beautiful image, with text.5*
JohnnyM () 5:19PM | Wed, 03 February 2021
Excellent work! I am really liking just how capable these girls are as a team! You coordinate them so well! My compliments to the art director that makes sure their mission turns out so well! :-)
Richardphotos () Online Now! 5:18PM | Thu, 04 February 2021
exceptional work Rod. each panel is very exciting
anahata.c () 10:18PM | Thu, 04 February 2021
I'm doing what I know every story writer hates: I'm commenting on your stories 'out of order'. Sorry! I'm here in bits and pieces, but when I see a new TNA go up, I can't go back to the ones I missed. I'll catch up eventually, I promise.
I'm telling you: You're getting more cinematic every time! Your fans see it too, and I love that Barb (I agree w/ her on the lighting) calls them "storyboards". (Brings me back to my advertising days---but my storyboards were cartoons---these are full 3D images.) You got angles here, sir: Love Kinnie, from that overhead shot, looking down into that opening with all those rust tones and the red-gold light on her face. Love that angle. (You using a crane? a steadicam? come on, what's your secret?) The next frame is from West Side Story! It's dance! I love the coordination---reminds me of Chinese martial arts films, or Samurai (japanese): You got a full dance thing going, with those great ropes up in the air. G4 is like the leader, and they all follow, even in the shadows. The angles are great too: the jutting walls, the different slants, and that light again (an amber-red-gold, really cool stuff).
Then---from the opposite side (you're a multiple camera guy)---with their wires looking almost like electrical charges, posed the moment right before the explosion (not a lotta dialogue in this piece, because it's all about preparation and anticipation)...terrific graffiti too, and broken windows...dramatic...
And finally, the entry to the place with an angled shot, that great cage (rusted to s___), and Kinnie doing her thing. (Man, those are wings.) Flying dragons...she delivers a side kick, and see ya! And the final frame, with one felled guy, Kinnie blasting open the cage, and introducing herself (and saying "I'm a fae," after what she's done is like superman saying, "I deliver milk...") Love the light from the explosion, and you got great background stuff---grafitti, crates, god knows what. You know how to decorate a 'shot'. And an upturned chair---great final frame! If you're doing these 'faster' these days, you're really good, because these are composed with the eye of a very meticulous director. (I picture your study at night: "Cut! cut! cut! I want EMOTION, people, I want HEART! Let's do it again!!! Jesus!!!") Terrific work Rod! When's the dvd coming out?
"I deliver milk..." I died... 🤣 I'm still wiping tears of laughter away... Thanks for sending me off to bed giggling my a$$ off, sir! You're a gem, Mark!
Yeah, at last count I think I have something like 11 cameras in this scene (counting the default Poser cams)... I really need to get a life! 😂 Should be on Blu-Ray sometime around 2024... LOL
Radar_rad-dude () 10:53PM | Thu, 04 February 2021
Great job on this chapter, Rod! Most enjoyable work! Bravo!
daggerwilldo () 11:30PM | Thu, 04 February 2021
Wonderful adventure series. So much fun to view and read.
mifdesign () 7:35PM | Fri, 05 February 2021
It gives me goose bumps while watching, it's beyond most fabulous outstanding brilliant awesome, magnificent Masterpiece of Finest Arts. I love it and I'm nuts about these stories! Unbelievable awesome!
Wolfenshire () Online Now! 9:25PM | Sat, 06 February 2021
Woohoo!!! Go girls!!! I was wondering if she was ever going to get out of that cage.