Girls From T.N.A: Breitlenger Jar: Ch 7 Page 04 by RodS ()
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As the Girls get things set up in the New York office, the poo is about to hit the rotary airmover back in DC... The bad guys are stepping things up. They have no idea....
At last, page 4 is done, now it's on to page 5 and beyond. Things are going to get.... Shall we say 'intense' very soon. Stay tuned. I promise to have these coming more often!
Oh.. I almost forgot... I put a little "Easter egg" in the last 2 frames... Can you find it! It's pretty subtle, but in plain view.. 😉
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Image Comments (42)
GrandmaT () 9:44AM | Sun, 26 July 2020
Those guys are in soooo much trouble. Is that Dan walking around in the background?
bakapo () 2:35PM | Mon, 27 July 2020
a good suspenseful action-packed chapter. Poses and details are perfect, as always.
anahata.c () 11:26PM | Fri, 31 July 2020
I read and viewed this when you posted it, and I was SURE I commented on it...I'm glad I always look through every image, when I comment, so I see what I've missed.
Kayla and Layla do have resemblance. And you present them with Lilla really well in the first frame. Lots of air/space in that, and I love the angled layout, with darks on the bottom and light in the top. Lilla and Layla have great exercise outfits too, w/ your usual mastery of clothing, pose, etc. The second frame is framed with wonderful rhythmic forms (the barbells and other repeating forms throughout---typical of gyms, though this one is luminous and high tech). And Layla looks so relaxed and classy. Love the reflections in the floor too, and Lilla's extended muscles. (They look so relaxed at this!) Great frame.
In the third, you do something cinematic again: you douse the gym in deep hazy shadows to make it look dangerous---because the dude is casing the place, and ready to attack...nice reflections too, and more of those repetitive forms from frame 2...And the 4th frame is the attack, with Lilla bounding in like a real athlete (I wouldn't want to run into her on a bad day), and joker-masks on the guys. I gotta say too, you handle the captions really well in a frame like this: They don't interfere with the action at all! I don't know if that's a small point, but it sure stands out to me. And in the final frame, Lilla gets hit in the head with that pail (from frame 4), and she seems not to be stopped by it; and we see layla inside the car, pissed off...as the dudes prepare for their getaway. A real cliff-hanger ending. And as for the FN 2187, you explained it, but when i saw it I thought it had to be the secret, and it had to be some character or code from some sci fi movie. I'm glad several people saw it (with more detail than I did). Your dramatic ending is a perfect conclusion, and your moving characters as well as the angles of the streets are just right for the chaos of the scene. Another fine, highly complex installment from you. And we wait to see what happens to the agents next....(these installments look like a huuuge amount of work and planning...I don't know how you turn so many out a year...)
misty7j3 () 9:30AM | Fri, 21 August 2020
'Wow'!! I luv this chapter......very intense and exciting images and story lines,Rod!!! I'm anxious to see what happens next!!! I likey!!!
K_T_Ong () 9:41AM | Sun, 01 November 2020
It would seem unusual that there should be no one else in the (very well-maintained and fully equipped) gym besides the two gals. Must be the COVID lockdown. :2049:
Hurrying to Page 05!