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THE CLICHE HOUNDS

Writers (none) posted on May 07, 2008
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I’ve always been more than happy to read critiques of my poems, whether they be complimentary and comfortable, or harsh and critical. The reader has rights - and the right to an honest opinion is one of them. There are, however, two features of criticism [not here on RR I might add!] which do make me wince a little. The first is where the critic presents an opinion as a universal truth almost akin to a tenet of Holy Writ. Two examples of this I’ve come across before: “one verb is worth seven adjectives” or “show not tell”. The critic [imo] should have the basic humility to preface this comment with ‘in my opinion’ because that is ALL it is. The other type of critic who frankly amuses me is the one I describe as a cliché hound, whose comments are restricted to spotting the cliché[s] in your poem Nothing else matters, it seems. I had these comments [on another site] about the last two lines in one of my poems: WORD WEAVER So polish your skills, weaver of words, since the gifts you bring may yet surpass the beauty of the rose and lack the sting “the last two lines seem cliché to me.” “and the last two lines aren't that great, kinda cliché even.” Now I've no problem with 'the last two lines aren't that great' – that is a perfectly valid simple value-judgement which the reader is entitled to make. It's the 'cliché' part that bothers me. I'm simply not comfortable with this usage since it is almost always derogatory and begs some important questions: First … who decides what is cliché? The critic? The critic and his friends? The critic's English Literature teacher/professor? Secondly … why does the critic assume that the writer cannot think of another form of words or another image? Isn't it just possible that the writer might have selected these words because he/she considered them the most appropriate? Thirdly … the frantic search for novelty of expression can too often lead to self-meaning slabs of verbal nonsense. Given the antiquity of literature it is highly unlikely that anything written now is anything more than a variant on what has been written before. However, I suspect the cliché-hounds will continue to hunt [without the steadying leash of ‘in my opinion’] … for these are the days of whine and posers. THE CLICHÉ-HOUNDS Heard afar a hoarse hullabaloo of harriers tongue-lolling, straining at the leash, eager for the chase: the cliché-hounds gather. Allow me, if you please, a modest morsel of cliché I am replete from an esoteric gourmet feast of exquisite exotic verbiage served on precious platters of cunning design and intricate verbal decoration. Allow me, if you please, a common slice of bread. Permit me, if you please, a little piece of commonplace. I am lost among the peerless lofty peaks of high pretentious imagery fearful above the deep dark metaphoric chasms and the treacherous sloughs of similes Permit me, if you please, to tread familiar ways. Sanction, if you please, a well-known phrase or two I am confused by untranslatable utterances and outré flights of wordy fancy reversed, imploded, combined and recombined meaning obscured and ever out of reach. Sanction, if you please, some plain and simple words. Let me, if you please, communicate direct I am trapped In the convoluted, involuted multi-clausal maze of mangled structures, obfuscation and dilettante punctuation and inaccurate spelling to boot. Let me, if you please, make common cause with common men. Heard closer the hollow sounds of hunting hounds, jaws a-drool, eyes wild in the search. In the ultimate literary critical thrill The cliché-hounds close in for the kill.

Comments (19)


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Meisiekind

5:23AM | Wed, 07 May 2008

Brilliantly done dear friend! :) Love the image too. Hugs, Carin xx

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se_400_Lux

7:25AM | Wed, 07 May 2008

Bravo! you state the main reason I remain here here, the artist's output/material stays intact-as the author chooses away from those pedantic hounds

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helanker

7:34AM | Wed, 07 May 2008

Yeah. I understood some of it and I think you are right. Who decides? And a beautiiful image.

lil_t

9:03AM | Wed, 07 May 2008

A very expressive writing Mike, brillant, and well done! The image, is perfect, I will add, tells the story too! "cudos to you"

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dhanco

9:11AM | Wed, 07 May 2008

I definitely disagree with the comment made to which you refer. The words are meaningful and tell a story. I will admit that at times it is hard to comment intelligently on your work, only having the desire to write myself, but they are alway brilliant. Well done on this one, Mike.

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romanceworks

10:32AM | Wed, 07 May 2008

LOL! You 'tell it like it is':o) Any writer who has been in critique situations has been bitten by the cliche hounds. Most 'bite off more than they can chew'. I have wounds that go deep into my ego.:o) Fantastic poem about a very 'sore subject'. CC

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beachzz

10:46AM | Wed, 07 May 2008

OMG~~how do you do it?? You've skewered these cliche-ers (and how's THAT for a word??), served them up on a fine platter of nicely roasted words, presented them on fine bone china, and let us feast on this wonderful meal of wonderful, wily words!!!

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hipps13

11:06AM | Wed, 07 May 2008

Hi Mike I read your words twice even so much to think so much to absorb and some things can smart wonderful work brings a smile sweet sunshine to you warm hug and love, Linda

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avalonfaayre

11:20AM | Wed, 07 May 2008

I remember this. I still have the same opinion. Nice tune, easy to dance to, I give it a ten, and have a nice day! All kidding aside, nice parry, touche!

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novelist

11:23AM | Wed, 07 May 2008

Well said! The same can be said about dogmatic (pun intended) critics of any kind (music, art, film, 3d work, dance, etc.) Art is subjective. That's why a gallery like this is a good way for us to share, test skills, and give ourselves permission to break the "rules" and meet like-minded creatives.

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leanndra

11:48AM | Wed, 07 May 2008

"These are the days of whine and posers". Definately not a cliche! Very clever words. I don't know, for me, I have always thought that people who used cliches, (I am one) merely did so because many times cliches tell a truth that most of us know. That is how certain phrases become cliches, is it not? Usually I don't preface my comments, (and I know it isn't necessary here). I always assume that is understood. Everything I comment on is my opinion about how something affects me personally, how it reaches me, you know? However, I have known such people as you write about. They are arrogant and self-important asses. ;) Your prose is very well written Mike and I really love it! Lea

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RodolfoCiminelli

12:05PM | Wed, 07 May 2008

Splendid creation my friend...!!! Fantastic image.....!!!!!!

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algra

3:00PM | Wed, 07 May 2008

Lay out of the picture, and especially the colors are fantastic. Concerning the text, I've to be humble, not more than a foreigner, happy to formulate some simple comments and hardly able to read a paper or order a beer in a pub (and then the owner answers by asking: "From which part of Holland do you come?".)

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tallpindo

5:35AM | Thu, 08 May 2008

I think it is a secular habit. Not knowing or wishing to avoid the soft words of the Song of Solomon the critic takes a drag on his cigarette to dull the senses then brutally engages a feud about some symbolism that empowered kings. It is not the mere townspeople that market by kitsch that are dismissed but the "over the top" nature of gargoyles and guardians. Oratory by this means over whelms timbrel and lyre.

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busi2ness

5:10PM | Thu, 08 May 2008

In my opinion the power of the cliche has always been a trusted method to effectively call up an existing frame of thoughts, concepts.

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tizjezzme

5:13PM | Thu, 08 May 2008

You are a brilliant writer.

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auntietk

3:21PM | Sat, 10 May 2008

Exactly. The way you write makes me want to hang up my pen, my friend. This is spectacular! Only one word niggles: "Let me, if you please, communicate direct" Is "direct" the appropriate form of the word? It pokes at my brain a bit. My automatic assumption is that your command of the language would not permit misuse, but still, it sticks. It occurs to me that this may be one of those instances when we're divided by a common language! My American brain may have only noticed British usage. As I say - it was just a bit of a niggle.

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LovelyPoetess

11:51PM | Sun, 11 May 2008

Bravo! Or should I say "sic em'!" : )

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amirapsp

2:58PM | Fri, 16 May 2008

WOW!!! Really cool work!


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