Sundown (Final) by bantha ()
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Thanks for the input. I dropped the plants, switched the blue light to an IBL and fiddled around with the lights some more. Yes, the light from behind the door is still misleading, but I like the effect, the image IMHO looks to boring without. Helpfull comments are still appreciated although I won't do another version soon.
Image Comments (21)
Wales () 3:54PM | Thu, 17 May 2007
The detail in the railing is excellent. I'm not exactly sure why but this image works for me. I like it! She looks real. Shouldn't there be a chair with the table?
BAR-CODE () 4:35PM | Thu, 17 May 2007
Just one more tip .. the teacup ... when you hang it downwards on her rhand finger ..it give some tention to the image ...is it gonna drop or not ;} . This might sound strange but its true that things like that make a image lot more interesting.. And her left arm a bit up and her left hand leaningon the Door or wall.. Like she is alomst falling a sleep from the warm sunlight ... :} Its things like that, that makes people look twice at image.. Good work on the light ;}
kalon () 7:30PM | Thu, 17 May 2007
Ahh! Lovely, this light works wonderfully, this is a very warm contented image. Comforting. Peace at the end of a hard day.
ArtPearl () 9:18AM | Fri, 18 May 2007
She looks really glowing and so peaceful. The patterns of light are really wonderful, weather or not they make physical sense.
kobaltkween () 12:14PM | Fri, 18 May 2007
beautifully peaceful. you've managed to capture the sense of a perfect moment.
pjz99 () 2:46AM | Sat, 19 May 2007
Really nicely done, the sunset lighting looks great! I'd suggest some Ambient Occlusion/postwork on skin parts to show a little bit of shadow line where the clothing interacts, and her hair needs a little gravity swing to it. Maybe a little camera move to get her out of dead center. Otherwise very lovely :)
Varnayrah () 4:05AM | Sat, 19 May 2007
Yes, I like that better than the first one. It has much more atmosphere without the plant.
Rutra () 9:14AM | Sat, 19 May 2007
Very good pose and expression. Very good game of light and shadows.
Boni () 11:46PM | Sun, 20 May 2007
A good feel to this one, it is an improvement over the last one and more realistic feel to it. I would make the source of the shadows across the door and her leg a little more obvious though. Just a thought.
DapperMan () 9:52PM | Wed, 30 May 2007
The lighting is much more convincing in this version. The interior light is maybe still a little strong, but the rest of the lighting is fantastic. Moody and serene. Very nice.