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Shelter from a storm

Writers Science Fiction posted on Apr 13, 2021
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The boys burst through the door with a torrent of rain and soggy leaves from the gale winds following them. Tan turned to the Coast Guard Officer and offered his hand. “Thanks for everything,” said Tan. The Naval Officer took Tan’s hand and shook it. “No problem, it’s just lucky we found him in time.” The Officer released Tan’s hand and waved at the building in front of them. “This is the Base Hurricane Over-flow Center. We really don’t need it anymore with the new stadium on the other side of the island, but we’re required by law to maintain it. Nobody has showed up, so you’ll have it all to yourself. I’ll have someone bring a hot meal and a thermos of hot chocolate over twice a day.” Tan nodded. “Thanks again.” The Officer turned away and hurried off to other important duties. Tan followed after the boys and pushed the door shut behind him. Luca was already at the snack table holding a very sharp looking knife in one hand and a loaf of bread in the other.” “Luca, let Jack cut that bread for you,” Tan called out to the boy. Luca rolled his eyes and glanced at Jack coming up beside him. “Sheesh, he thinks he’s our dad or something.” Jack took the knife from Luca. “It’s kind of what I hired him to do,” replied Jack. “I don’t need a dad, I have one,” pouted Luca, still in denial that his father had been killed by the evading Erodens a week prior on a planet fourteen light-years from the planet they were currently on. “I don’t think he’s trying to replace your dad,” said Jack. “But he is doing what I hired him to do. Do you think you could have found a table full of free food and warm beds out of the rain, or got that whirly bird thing to come out and get me?” Luca ignored Jack and grabbed a large jar of grape jelly. “I want a big slice of that bread.” Luca struggled with the jar for a moment, grunting as he did to try and get the lid off. Tan came up behind Luca and took the jar from him. “That Naval Officer said there’s some spare clothes in the boxes against the far wall. You’re both soaking wet, have your snack, and then put on some dry clothes before you catch a cold, and don’t forget to hang those wet clothes up to dry.” Tan popped the lid off the jar and handed it back to Luca. Luca took the jar and glared at Jack. “See, he doesn’t know anything.” Jack looked up at Tan. “We can’t catch a cold, we’ve been given shots for every known virus in fifty galaxies.” Tan smiled. “You said yourself there hasn’t been a Gatekeeper on this world in three-thousand years. You have no idea if a super virus hasn’t developed here. Let’s not take any chances, change into some dry clothes.” Jack glanced at Luca. “He’s got a point, we’re 800 million light-years from Aeden space. This was an outpost world, and we don’t know what happened to the Gatekeeper.” Luca made a ‘pfft’ sound and grabbed the slice of bread from Jack. Tan gave Jack a pat on the shoulder. “Oh, and you didn’t hire me, you kidnapped me.” Luca’s head snapped around. “You took a lesser human from his world without permission? That’s forbidden!” Jack shrugged. “That’s the least of my crimes.” Luca’s eyes widen. “I thought you were the new apprentice Gatekeeper my dad was going to train. Oh my gosh! You’re a World Walker!” Luca puffed his chest out and narrowed his eyes. “By the authority investimated in me by Gate Command, I’m placing you under arrest.” Jack cut another slice of bread. “I saved you from the Eroden Battle Drones, you might want to be a little more grateful. And the word is invested, not investimated.” “I’m going to turn you in to the Sherata,” insisted Luca. “Really? Oh no!” Jack slapped some grape jelly onto his slice of bread. “So, how many gates is a Gatekeeper allowed to travel through during an emergency?” “Three,” replied Luca. “And how many have we gone through since we left your world?” asked Jack. Luca turned pale as the blood drained from his face. “Five,” whispered Luca. Jack nodded. “Yeah, five, the Sherata will be looking for you also now.” Luca’s jaw dropped open. “You’ve made me a criminal.” “Welcome to the dark side, buddy,” said Jack with a grin. “That’s not fair,” stuttered Luca, his eyes welling up with tears. “That’s enough, Jack,” said Tan. “Don’t worry, Luca, we’ll explain it to the authorities.” Luca looked up at Tan with pleading eyes. “Have you ever tried to talk to a Sherata, they don’t listen.” “I’m not afraid of a little tiger,” said Tan. “I won’t let them touch you.” Jack shrugged. “He’s pretty strong, Luca, he is from a heavy gravity world.” Luca looked from Tan to Jack. “Oh my gosh, you told him they were just regular tigers? No, a Sherata isn’t a regular tiger, they’re taller than you are. The Sherata are genetically altered super intelligent saber-tooth tigers. We made them to fight wars on other planets. We made them to be able to fight those Eroden Battle Drones, and the Sherata usually win.” Tan glared at Jack. Jack shrugged. “Technically, they’re tigers, I didn’t lie.”

Comments (15)


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STEVIEUKWONDER

6:01AM | Tue, 13 April 2021

Such a delicate and moving piece. Lovely work!

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JoeJarrah

7:11AM | Tue, 13 April 2021

Great image and fun story... The sherata sound intriguing; a little like Kzinti

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jendellas

8:23AM | Tue, 13 April 2021

Jack makes me chuckle.

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eekdog Online Now!

11:18AM | Tue, 13 April 2021

gimme shelter, Rolling Stones. excellent story and image.

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bakapo

12:27PM | Tue, 13 April 2021

Nice big beads and food. Tan is in the middle of an interesting event.

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miwi

1:34PM | Tue, 13 April 2021

Wonderful image,fantastic story,as always,excellent work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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VDH

3:09PM | Tue, 13 April 2021

Original scene ! Great story !!

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rhol_figament

8:42PM | Tue, 13 April 2021

A tiger by any other stipes eh... ;)

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RodS Online Now!

9:22PM | Tue, 13 April 2021

I'm really digging all the twists and turns here... This is great! And your art makes it even better! Yeah.... Watch out for those super viruses... they can be pretty grim....

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Tracesl

3:09AM | Wed, 14 April 2021

excellent

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donnena

3:30PM | Wed, 14 April 2021

Hired, Kidnapped.... TECHNICALITIES!!!

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uncollared

6:58AM | Thu, 15 April 2021

Great scene and POV

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Radar_rad-dude

12:55AM | Fri, 16 April 2021

Love the dialogue! A most wonderful and amusing chatter between them! Really gets this story moving quite nicely! Bravo!

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anahata.c

12:48AM | Mon, 10 May 2021

love the little twists and turns here, and the rise of Luca as a protagonist (treated w/ loving humor), and Jack's protection but also prodding of Luca. (I keep thinking Luca Brasi, from the Godfather, who sleeps with the fishes...sorry! it's got NOTHING to do with your tale, I just don't hear the name "Luca" very often...) This is another of your typical, sensitive, humorous and loving treatments of a young person looking after another young person with real adulthood, and the irony and humor of the younger one's response. And I love Tan's reaction when he finds out about the 'tigers'. You really weave humor into very serious narrative and dialogue w/ panache and ease. I'm very impressed with that. Plus the virus reference hits home, given our present time. Lots of delightful give and take in this chapter. And I love Luca in the image---love that cute hat, and the grungy room and floor. Your black and white is really rich and varied. This looks like a dorm I lived in, my freshman year of college (Bard College). A very rich and delightful as well as danger-filled chapter. Really well done.

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dragongirl

8:54PM | Sat, 29 May 2021

I really like that your series of images are all in this high- contrast B&W. It helps support the strangeness of your extraterrestrial characters. Oh ye Gates and Gateways . . .


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