secret place 3 "andalusia" by Benettor

Vue • Landscape • posted on May 03, 2006

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working on textures and lights...i need sugg about this render... have a nice day Benettor

Comments (17)

Eisbaerchen

2:41AM | Wed, 03 May 2006

wow, cool shore-line and a wonderful warm mood...great work !

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Vertecles

3:56AM | Wed, 03 May 2006

Excellent render. Maybe a bit more "blending" would help around the shoreline? Also..the shadow from the structure is out - is it sitting on the landscape correctly?

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kenwas

4:56AM | Wed, 03 May 2006

I'd skip the architectual element at least in that location. It seems out of place with the terrain shape and casts a floating shadow over the water. Tighten up the shore line particularly the area in the shade by removing the post work there or minimalize it quite a bite. The birds look great and are scaled perfectly.

garyandcatherine

5:43AM | Wed, 03 May 2006

Lose the shore line foam or at least improve on it, drop the shrine model or maybe retexture it and change the yellowish rock at the bottom of the terrain---it doesn't look so hot. Aside from those few changes that will take you all of 2 minutes, you really have the makings of a HOT 20 image. It is really good so far.

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Stardust_Crossing

6:01AM | Wed, 03 May 2006

Excellent quality and peaceful atmosphere! Great work!

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1pearl

6:47AM | Wed, 03 May 2006

Wonderful view ! Superb photo !!!

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Mondwin

8:09AM | Wed, 03 May 2006

Looks as a magical place!!!!!!!!!!!bravissimo!V:DDD,hugsxx

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Irish

9:57AM | Wed, 03 May 2006

A gorgeous place!! Love the landscaping and birds...beautiful shoreline as well. I would just move the gazebo structure back as it doesn't seem to be sitting in the air somewhat - other than that, I think it rocks!!

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dam2011

10:13AM | Wed, 03 May 2006

Wonderful Excellent !!!!!

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Schnuck

10:51AM | Wed, 03 May 2006

Very beautiful!!!

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BGHart

11:40AM | Wed, 03 May 2006

Beautiful landscape view with excellent vegetation and great POV. :) Only thing that is disturbing is the position of the little pavillion. When you look at the shadow you'll see, that he is floating in the air. I guess you have to change the terrain first, to put the pavillion down, otherwise it will land on the sharp edge of the hill. I am looking forward to your update. :)

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sittingblue

12:40PM | Wed, 03 May 2006

it's a litte a grainy... I think you could bump up the render quality. Besides that it's an awesome picture. FANTASTIC!

IQ200

5:57PM | Wed, 03 May 2006

Fantastic work. Very well done.

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Shari123

12:11AM | Thu, 04 May 2006

An excellent landscape with a beautiful sandy shoreline. The monument has been mentioned already so I won't tell you that again. Outstanding work!

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Benettor

3:31AM | Thu, 04 May 2006

thnks so much for your sugg:) this is more better than the comments like (((excelent ,,,well done...etc) i need comments like these who you told me before.. make me better and better... So yes i saw my mistakes but after 11 hours who my render finish:P so i left the render to make new one with corect position my gazepo stuff and everything else...Again thnks

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