Orchard by angel_of_darkness
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Description
I close my eyes and dream away,
And on a golden cloud I lay.
In an orchard filled with trees and fruits
And every tree has golden roots.
The air around me smells so sweet
But there is another thing I need.
I need someone to hold my hand
and together we
Comments (3)
SchererPFX
Marvelous, you really get the feeling that you are actually out there. Great atmosphere!
TallPockets
Excellent work. Loved the rhythm and rhyme to this. Ah, young love. ~sigh~.
Wolfspirit
What can I say about this piece of writing to give it justice? The words escape me Although I will try. From you these words wrote lying softly before my eyes as if lightly placed footprints upon the earth As I study them walking gently, yet silently a pleasant flow within each one contentment embracing me as I move forwarduntil the end finding a treasure of memories of my own of a perfect moment peace and loveThank you for leaving your words eloquently so that I might follow "Excellent!"