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Moon On The Water

Writers Fantasy posted on Jun 13, 2007
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A Thousand Thanks to rainbows, Goha, and Sir David for dragging me through the Avatar process. Also for their incredible generosity in the loanof the images. Another thousand Thanks to Rita, (three_grrr, for the generos loan of Willow Moon as a thumbnail for this poem. Another from the Poetry In Motion Challenge Moonlight on the water By BobbiJo McBroom Things here aren't what they seem, they trick the weary mind I ran to catch a glimpse of stars, and Lo what did I find A field of flowers stretched out, as far as the eye could see What cruel Goddess have I wronged, who'd play this trick on me I rode here on a shooting star, to see what I was here below The ride was long and I was tired, I came so far you know I fell asleep beneath a tree, and then when I awoke I'd drifted off beside a lake, my lovely boots were soaked The sky is such a pale blue shade, not dark as when I came There are beings of such magic here, but I know not their names Just when I think all is lost, I notice something strange That one bright star has moved down the sky, the light begins to change The darkness that I love so, has settled down once more The moon I noticed coming down, is shining as before Ah there they are the stars I know, winking into sight From down here on your Earth, they give such a paltry light There upon the water rests my dear friend moon I'll beg of him a ride back home, I must get there soon Just as he settles in, to kiss himself goodnight I touch the moon there on the water, I grasp it's shining light I stride the trail it sketches, across the lake so still I step onto the silvery bridge, and drawing on my skill I walk the bridge across the lake, and keep the moon still in my sight As he lifts his shining head I ride, his moonbeams into the night I surf into the starry void, back to whence I came Those mortals whom I met down there, cannot recall my name I never will again come down, I love living here on high I am free to wander where I will, I have regained the sky! Anyone want to repost with an image? Feel free. BJ

Comments (19)


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CarolSassy

9:28PM | Wed, 13 June 2007

Wonderful fanciful poem! Love it! Excellent work! (:

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three_grrr

9:42PM | Wed, 13 June 2007

http://www.renderosity.com/mod/gallery/index.php?image_id=1376136 Don't know how to send you an image .. but this one at the above link .. I think you'll have to copy and past it! I posted this one in February. Snag it if you want, though I have a feeling that there must be a boatload of fabulous moon photos out there! I adore the poem, Dang but you're good!

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npauling

9:48PM | Wed, 13 June 2007

Another lovely poem BJ and it is sending all sorts of messages for a picture I hope someone can do it justice and catch the magic you have created.

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Auzifairy

10:26PM | Wed, 13 June 2007

So nice to see wonderful writing....

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romanceworks

8:49AM | Thu, 14 June 2007

Really enjoy your whimsical and very lyrical style of poetry. Such visual and lovely imagry, told like an adventure. And one of the many lines I just adored 'touch the moon there on the water, I grasp it's shining light', I could really see and feel that. Outstanding writing. CC

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clydedough

10:33AM | Thu, 14 June 2007

A nice trip! Im sorry but i havent found my Haloween story, hope i find it before the next! Very nice thoughts you write.

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rainbows

5:18PM | Thu, 14 June 2007

A superb poem BJ. Such a beautiful journey reading. I do not have a moonshot, yet ;-) Someone must have one that would do this wonderful writing credit. Happy night and hugs. Diane.

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Richardphotos

7:46PM | Thu, 14 June 2007

excellent prose and very original

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justnew

8:41PM | Sat, 16 June 2007

Such a beautiful poem.

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shahlaa

10:47PM | Thu, 21 June 2007

You have the most beautiful soul...how do I know this, because it shows in all you do...a lovely poem...very well done!

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NekhbetSun

7:24AM | Sat, 23 June 2007

Superb, once again, BJ S your words always touch

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tatman6

12:24PM | Thu, 28 June 2007

Another great work! Such flowing word that touch the soul are rare, you have a wanderful talent, Great job and keep up the writting!!

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TwoPynts

9:02AM | Mon, 02 July 2007

Inspiring poem, it conjures up all sorts of imagery for me I wish I could capture with my camera or computer! ;'D

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Druidstorm

11:08AM | Sun, 08 July 2007

"The realm of the wee ones is a realm of beauty indeed and your words open a portal for all of us to see!" Keep pushing them words my friend. BRAVO!!!...:))

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sirdavid

3:57PM | Tue, 10 July 2007

Superb and imaginative poem.

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lior

1:30PM | Thu, 12 July 2007

Another lovely poem.Superb!

MrsLubner

4:01PM | Fri, 27 July 2007

A lovely and emotional composition.

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Bothellite

11:46PM | Wed, 01 August 2007

... and I hope that your spirit is as free as your words. Excellent.

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OldHippieKeyboard

12:53PM | Thu, 02 August 2007

Oh, you just have to take me with you on one of your nighttime journeys... This is so beautiful and wondrous. It sends me off into fantasy land. Yours is a spirit that can lift one to mystical heights.


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