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March Sun

Writers Romance posted on Mar 22, 2005
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March Sun I do not want to blossom anymore or bloom for you Nor get burnt by your brightness your brilliance with your intense warmth and passionate heat I slowly spread my petals for you I evolved, changed and opened up exposed my soul and vulnerable pistil desiring you more than stamen You smiled on me and praised my accomplishment cheered me on with continuous rays of encouragement Then you left behind the horizon leaving me in the dark and cold alone and insecure I wilted and wept in dew I closed back up hung my head hid my pain silently I begged for your return and you enlightened me with your presence once again I opened Again I showed off my beauty Again welcomed your praise, absorbed you and danced in your light Again you left me� No more No more, morning hello No more, evening goodbye I do not want to blossom anymore or bloom for you I curse the dark hours ...watching the horizon anxiously

Comments (3)


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Shadowmonkey

9:28AM | Tue, 22 March 2005

I read a sadness through these lines or that is how is seemed to me. It has a slow peace with moves along nicely with the poems mood. Excellently done ;0)

Wolfspirit

7:48PM | Sun, 27 March 2005

To me this poem represents love, for often it is as painful as it is pleasurable Excellent, I truly enjoyed this read!

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meico

11:51AM | Fri, 23 May 2008

How sad that pain can be told so exquisitely! I love the way you've carried the metaphor consistently throughout the poem. Excellent. Mike


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