Magic Dawn by mamabobbijo

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on May 26, 2007

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A collaboration. Diane's AMAZING photo, and my humble words. Old Magic can become new again when viewed through a child's eyes. The sun came out to play today It chased the rain and clouds away Oh! Mom wake up Oh! Please don't pout The sun's almost up! Please! Let's go out Come on! Please Mama, let's go see What the faeries left for me We'll check the leaves and see if they grew Maybe they've painted you roses for you The birds are singing Please! Mom get up! We can put our breakfast in a cup We'll take it down and eat outside The breeze will come from far and wide It will blow our bubbles all about Oh! Please get up and let's go out It's been raining for Oh! So long Hurry please Mom! Before the sun is gone I've got your shoes Mom, Please I can't wait Mom please get up it's getting late We can play, "I spy with my little eye" "I see magical colours" say "it's a magic sunrise" She puts her feet down on the floor Puts on her slippers heads out the door The sun's not up it's still a spark! My goodness baby it's still dark! They cuddle so close in the front porch chair Those first enchanted rays creep through the air Baby nestles back to whisper with a sigh "Hey Mom I spy with my little eye, magical colours up so high" Says Mama, "Little One it's a magic sunrise" Little one has taken her by surprise She's discovered new magic, become more wise Watching the dawning of wonder in her daughter's eyes.

Comments (22)

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Richardphotos

6:54PM | Sat, 26 May 2007

it is an awesome sunrise and original writing

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rainbows

6:55PM | Sat, 26 May 2007

BJ, this is glorious writing. I have read several times and will read again.. and again. You have the ability to write as a child thinks. This work is sublime and enchanting. Dawn and your poem about the joy of it.. speaks to my heart. It is one of the two most precious times of any day, the second being dusk, sundown. Beautiful and outstanding work from you. Hugs. Diane.

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shahlaa

11:22PM | Sat, 26 May 2007

I have always been amazed at how you write...everything you do flows...this is so beautiful...I too sat here and read over it several times and each time it tugged at my heart...the blessings of a child, thank you for sharing.

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auntietk

11:25PM | Sat, 26 May 2007

Wonderful writing! So perfect with Di's photo.

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romanceworks

12:29AM | Sun, 27 May 2007

Your writing has such a melodic, conversational flow that is wonderful. Love how you tell a story with your words and such a touching moment between mother and child. The picture goes so well with it, too. CC

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CarolSassy

3:38AM | Sun, 27 May 2007

Sweet 'n' lovely! Thank you! (:

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npauling

9:44PM | Mon, 28 May 2007

A wonderful poem of a magical time of the day. Your words seem to flow along so easily you are truly talented and I look forward to your postings. Thankyou for brightening the day.

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TallPockets

6:15PM | Fri, 01 June 2007

Wonderfully said! "From the mouths of babes", indeed. My best to you and yours, kind soul. T.P.

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Druidstorm

2:21AM | Wed, 06 June 2007

Once again you create a magical world with your words, the enchantment of the morning sun is today taking for nothing yet you have made it a new beginning once again. Your craft is indeed an enigma so clear that it brings a tear, forever keep your wisdom my friend for I will be here eternally to see it grow and wow as it grown! BRAVO!!!...:))

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three_grrr

11:14PM | Tue, 12 June 2007

I'm so glad you posted on my gallery, because now I've discovered yours! This is such an awesome poem, made me look at the image with new eyes .. sunrise will never be the same again, I will always see it through the that little one's eyes now!

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justnew

8:59AM | Wed, 13 June 2007

Simply exquisite. Excellent presentation.

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NekhbetSun

7:22AM | Sat, 23 June 2007

The words and stunning image go sooo well together....most excellent S

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TwoPynts

9:00AM | Mon, 02 July 2007

Diane's AMAZING photo drew me in, and your words did the rest. Captivating. :)

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Hendesse

11:33AM | Thu, 05 July 2007

Wonderful writing, I admire your creativity!

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wildgoha

2:42PM | Wed, 11 July 2007

ahh i adore this so much ! 2 amazing ladies united forces WOW makes me so happy ! your words and Di's captured sky is so perfect ! WOOO HOOOO bat is sleeping now safe and happy thank you for care of us both also :) and it is pleasure to see my touch in avatar with you and Di ah so special

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pupino

7:56AM | Wed, 01 August 2007

Fabulous!!!!!

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OldHippieKeyboard

12:47PM | Thu, 02 August 2007

I don't usually get mushy over these sentiments, but the way you put this all together was so fascinating and touching I had to read it several times before commenting. This is an absolutely magical creation. Bravo!

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