Project Angel - Part 5 by mrestey ()
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OK friends. At long last here is part five.
When I started this I believe I said it would be only three or four pages long and here we are at number five.
Well, I THINK the next one will finish it. If not, the one after for sure.
Thanks to all of you who have stayed with it and left comments. My apologies to those who actually like it and have been patiently waiting for more - like you Rod, for example, LOL.
Thanks to you, the viewer for stopping in and leaving some sort of comment. : )
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Very good work on this page. had to go back and re-read the story from page one. The problem you face, at least IMO is that now that you have a great story going, you're going to want to continue on, mainly because people like me are going to request, nay, DEMAND that you start a new chapter. You've got a great storyline, cool characters and it ties in with Rod's Girls from T.N.A. and Diemamker's Ranpha.
I doubt that either of them get the chance if Rico's on her tail..... She's tall, blonde, gorgeous, and hangs out with Ranpha and Trish - which makes her dangeous as hell! LOL! This looks really good, Mike! The layout is excellent, and the speech bubbles look great! Super job, buddy! Dude..... Never, ever plan on just 3 or 4 pages..... Your story will say "Oh, no, you don't......." and get into your head, and make you do more..... Trust me on this one.... :-D I had planned on my T.N.A. story only being 3 chapters of 10 pages each when I started... Chapter 3 will end on Page 21, and I have almost 20 pages written for Chapter 4....so far.....
Great page!!...So thats what happened! I know Rico not happy about this...Or Ranpha for that matter, see she sent them the parts...Can't wait to see who this person is! This is great stuff...you know thats there's no way your going to be able to finish it in two more pages right! Take it from me and RodS, you'll see that this story will take fight and start wrighting its self...like who is Frankie, and whats her side of the story... Can't wait to see the next page, so I hope you have a great week!..
I read what Rod said... I can't believe it's been YEARS since I did BONDAGE... I started a story without knowing where it was going - lol after my first few images, I sat down and thought I'm going to give every episode the start of the alphabet, that way when the viewer reads the title, they know if they've missed one, plus, it gave you a hint at what the next title might be.... I made two storys, and wrote 3 more... I lost my laptop, so my James Bondage character got trapped.... MagikUnicorn made a video for me and I told him after puting my Bondage images together to post at the end book III would be out in 2012 - ain't now way. Financially I'm hurting and I've been an emotional wreck lately. I've had fears someone in my life was going to commit suicide and it made me think back at losing a friend and his mother and other emotional wrecks... to tell you the truth, I really don't know if I'll ever put the other 3 stories together, it takes time. But you'll find the longer your story lasts, the more your characters come "alive" and in your head, you know exactly how they'll act, why they act the way they do - it becomes real - lol