I Had A Dream Last Night by vaggabondd ()

2D • Horror • posted on Jan 15, 2012

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I had a dream last night
There were thousands of bodies
Walking around bumping into each other
Because they had no eyes
Their eyes were taken away
Because when they could see
They had no vision
They had a voice
But all they could do was moan
Because when they could speak
They never had anything to say
Now they moan because of their pain
They were hungry
Hungry for salvation
But there was nothing left on the plate
Because when it was time to come in
They were too late
The scary thing is
The one in the middle
I recognized his face

This is a little darker than my poem yesterday lol. I wanted to write something so I put on a little music and this is what I came up with. The song that I listened to that put me in mood was â mad world by Gary Jules â if you want to try and write something gloomy I highly recommend this one. It works for me ha ha. Thanks for everything. I hope you like my poem

Randy

Image Comments (17)

Faemike55 () posted at 10:29AM Sun, 15 January 2012

Very cool work I can just picture all this happening

flaviok () posted at 10:34AM Sun, 15 January 2012

How meu amigo, o sentido da poesia mais profunda, que só um verdadeiro poeta pode revelar¨ " Their eyes were taken away Because when they could see That had no vision "... Se pelo menos erem se derem conta, do que não vêem, não ouvem e não dizem, o amor e interior da alma humana. Brilhante, perfeito, aplausos mil How my friend, the deeper sense of poetry, that only a true poet can reveal ¨ "Their eyes were taken away Because when they could see That had no vision "... If at least erred if realize, than don't see, don't hear and not say, love and the interior of the human soul. Brilliant, perfect, applause thousand

Feliciti () posted at 11:22AM Sun, 15 January 2012

i like it :) and know this song too !! really great done !!

barryjeffer () posted at 11:28AM Sun, 15 January 2012

Excellent poetry... thank you for sharing.

alessimarco () posted at 11:44AM Sun, 15 January 2012

~Penetrating!!~

eekdog () posted at 12:06PM Sun, 15 January 2012

i had a dream the night before the broncos won, so much for my dreams, but yours sound scarry Randy, gripping and well written.

BIPOLARTWO () posted at 12:28PM Sun, 15 January 2012

Dark word's are easier to write the easier cheerful one's. But if we don't write about the dark as well as the light we would be lying to ourselves. And i like what you wrote.......

kbrog () posted at 12:59PM Sun, 15 January 2012

It fits for the time we are in. ;) Great poem! :)

brycek () posted at 2:02PM Sun, 15 January 2012

Terrific poem, Randy!!

drifterlee () posted at 2:35PM Sun, 15 January 2012

Very dark poen but cool!

adrie () posted at 2:44PM Sun, 15 January 2012

Creepy dark writen poem Randy.

jocko500 () posted at 4:55PM Sun, 15 January 2012

cool story

wysiwig () posted at 1:33AM Mon, 16 January 2012

This works on any number of levels, both political and religious. There are none so blind as those who will not see.

dakotabluemoon () posted at 6:15AM Mon, 16 January 2012

Excellent work and words to doom and gloom.

mgtcs () posted at 10:56PM Wed, 18 January 2012

Marvelous poem my friend, excellent theme, superbly done!

Merrylee () posted at 10:15PM Thu, 19 January 2012

Mmmmmmmmmmm!!!!

velleman () posted at 12:24PM Fri, 20 January 2012

Simply great! These lines are about us - poor human beings trying to survive in this absolutely alienated and hostile world. We pretend we cannot see things, we pretend we do not have voices..