She killed the music man by vaggabondd ()

Writers • Realism • posted on Jan 27, 2007

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Everyday he wakes up
With a song in his heart
He’s looking for love
And maybe a good laugh
But it never last long

She can’t stand to see him smile
So she starts in
Wears him down
As the day goes on
Standing on his soul
Jumping up and down
Until the smile is gone
And the music has stopped

The crazy thing is
What makes her happy
Is killing the music man

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colynn ()  posted at 11:24AM Sat, 27 January 2007

I know a couple just like this, she is evil!! Excellent writing! ^^

A2J2001 ()  posted at 6:49PM Sat, 27 January 2007

Boy do I know a couple just like this. Keep up the good work.

D.C.Monteny ()  posted at 7:46PM Sat, 27 January 2007

Love is a dog from hell... Thank you for this great poem!

Zeldie ()  posted at 12:02AM Mon, 29 January 2007

No urchin1996 - love is giving each other the space and love to be the best person you can possibly be. What Mr. Vaggabondd described is not love - it's possession. Great writing Randy.

mamabobbijo ()  posted at 5:28PM Mon, 29 January 2007

I'm with Zeldie! This is so sad, but well written. BJ