Girls From T.N.A: Breitlenger Jar: Ch 7 Page 02 by RodS ()
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Here's Page 2 in the latest of the Girls' adventures!
I know it's been a little slow in coming with Chapter 7, but my Muse is beginning to stir again, and I've been working on some new content, and doing some writing. I've had a few new ideas pop into what's left of my mind, and there will be some fun things coming up pretty quickly. There will be some action happening pretty quickly, and some surprises from some of our new recruits. Stay tuned... The creative juices are starting to flow again, and it's going to be a ride....
If you've joined the story late, the girl with pink hair is Layla, who is the younger sister of Kayla, one of our archivists in the D.C. branch. Layla interns with Lilla (dark hair) in the computer lab. Layla was first introduced back in Chapter 5, along with Kayla. Layla and Kayla are by my pal Jenny (Pixeluna), and Lilla is by Lizzie (Dream 9 Studios).
Just wanted to say a belated "Happy Birthday" to Steve (eekdog) - hope to have a little treat for you in a day or two.
Thanks as always for all your awesome comments, support, and friendships! I couldn't have got this far without you!
Stay safe, stay healthy, and give someone a smile. A smile can be seen even behind a mask...
(P.S. - I'll soon start adding credits again...)
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Image Comments (38)
lwperkins () 9:53PM | Sun, 24 May 2020
How exciting!! LOL Bugface, what a great baddie name! Why do I think that things won't go quite as planned for these guys?
OmniFX () 10:01PM | Sun, 24 May 2020
Wowser! this is a really fantastic page. Very exciting and entertaining story. Looking forward to your next page in this adventure. Great render and lighting RodS!
mtdana () 10:42PM | Sun, 24 May 2020
Expecting an easy job - probably not! Great work on these panel RodS!
Radar_rad-dude () Online Now! 10:43PM | Sun, 24 May 2020
Very fine chapter with excellent dialogue and illustrations! Most excellent work, Rod! Bravo!
misty7j3 () 10:55PM | Sun, 24 May 2020
Awesome images and story lines Rod......this looks verrry interesting......can't wait to see more!! I likey!!
adorety () 11:35PM | Sun, 24 May 2020
Love the gangster names. Intriguing plot line forming. Excellent scene renders and, as always, your attention to detail makes the images really stand out. Just having a bit of the guy's hand holding the photo adds to the mood. I hope the Girls keep these girls safe.
bakapo () 12:09AM | Mon, 25 May 2020
The suspense builds. Good stuff here. Your details always amaze me. I like the lighting through the window blinds and the view out the window and on the computer screen. Even the names are interesting and dangerous. Good job on all of this.
STEVIEUKWONDER () Online Now! 1:06AM | Mon, 25 May 2020
Well, you caught me there! How much do you want, you tyrant, to wipe my BMW from that CCTV? Hahahaha! Excellent Sir!
starship64 () 1:37AM | Mon, 25 May 2020
I've got a feeling this job isn't going to be as easy as it appears.
adrie () 4:49AM | Mon, 25 May 2020
As always, your story telling images are so cool Rod, amazing and fantastic job on those my friend.
Rtesian () 6:05AM | Mon, 25 May 2020
Your scene depictions are just remarkable, Rod, almost cinematic. The clarity of detail and texture really stand out. Note to bad guys: females on the way to the gym, work out !!
fireangel () 7:35AM | Mon, 25 May 2020
Hmm, to make lie easier they ought to plan on getting her after her workout so she's tired. Not that I think would make a huge difference to the difficulties they might encounter...
Darkglass () Online Now! 8:53AM | Mon, 25 May 2020
Just fantastic....cool story...lots of work a massive undertaken to produce all these panels.....top job sir..! great renders..!
zaqxsw () 9:22AM | Mon, 25 May 2020
Intreguing... Looking foward to the next installment! Fantastic job!
eekdog () Online Now! 9:47AM | Mon, 25 May 2020
I sure enjoy the awesome use of props in each panel. if I had lots of what you had I might be able to do a better job on my series. he's going to regret calling her a twit. can't wait for the action when they try and nab her. interesting developments going on Rod. love your bad guy characters and storyline where it's going. bugface what a funny name. love the last panel of him holding a pic of the girls. wonder how easy it will be nabbing her. we will soon see. thanks for the great page my friend,
goldie () 9:52AM | Mon, 25 May 2020
Really do like this page, Rod...those gansta names are a blast :) In addition to a great story line, the detail and lighting are excellent. Eagerly awaiting the next installment...Good to know your muse is awakening (wish I could say the same).
donnena () 10:33AM | Mon, 25 May 2020
Hooray!!! More of Chapter 7!!!!
& it lives up to expectations!
UteBigSmile () Online Now! 1:39PM | Mon, 25 May 2020
Your new series of images are all wonderfully done, I wish you a good start into the new week, stay vigilant and healthy!
Faemike55 () 4:26PM | Mon, 25 May 2020
I personally think that this cake might be filled with dog poo. Just sayin'.
Richardphotos () Online Now! 9:14PM | Mon, 25 May 2020
I really dig your imagination and talent with Poser. my imagination ran out on me several years ago
anahata.c () 8:48AM | Tue, 26 May 2020
First, I'm glad your muse is returning piece by piece...I fully understand why it's been slowed by the pandemic. (And every time you speak of "what's left of my brain," I get this great image of a vast auto-graveyard, with this huge brain sitting there, in the darkness, with the sign, "what's left of Rod's brain..." There's a story in there, I swear!) Whatever you feel about your brain, it's on full, brilliant display every time you come to RR, so, from our perspective, you have nothing to worry about...
I love that you use old gangster film diction, and the names match too. (Some childhood cronies called you "bugface" lol? How did you get back at them: Grow antennae and mandibles?) (I don't even know what a mandible is!) Anyway, you have a real 30s/40s dialogue here, w/ matching names. I almost expect E.G. Robinson to come in and say, "we're gonna do it MY way, seeeee?"
You start with the 'establishing shot', and your lighting gives just enough spookiness to say this is gonna be a sinister tale. (Well, "GRAVES" is a clue!) Your lighting remains subtle and sinister throughout, and I agree with Barb (bakapo) about the light from the windows. (I agree with her on everything she says. She hits things on the head every time.) I like the dark office too, and the screen with the dark night image: makes this place seem sneaky, back-handed, surveilling...Plus the boss who says, in essence, "you mess up, you pay". You even have the light on the computer-front---blue and mysterious. It just adds a feeling of being watched. And I really like how you bring Layla and Lilla into it---via a photograph, rather than a full frame: Story-within-story stuff. And, "this is gonna be a piece of cake": Anyone who knows your work knows those are gonna be "famous last words" which the gangsters will regret one day.
Given that you have to write these, then serialize them---picking just the right details for each installment, and no more or less (I appreciate that ability more than you know, since I struggle with it constantly)---then illustrate them, with your expert way w/ light, hue, composition, pose, costume, etc, I can understand how these aren't easy when you're tired, depressed or emptied out. These are huge undertakings. (It's why I've never, ever done graphic novels.) I wish you all the inspiration in the world with these. I hope your spirits pick up more and more with each day. It's been a helluva year, hasn't it? (And we have such a fine leader...) Take care, and thanks for all you bring to this place. You're a beacon here.