Girls From T.N.A: Breitlenger Jar: Ch 6 Page 26 by RodS ()
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The team is growing - and will grow a bit more as you will see soon. In the meantime...... The news is spreading. And in this case it's a little bit like smacking a hornets' nest with a stick. All kinds of stuff is about to hit the rotary air-mover... And someone's likely to get stung...
Things are beginning to become interesting as Ar's powers begin to manifest themselves. The Girls are in for more surprises in the future.. Stay tuned! On to the next page...
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Dang, AR is peed off!, great expression with her, wonder if that caffeine or lack of is setting her off like that. Love each frame and story is going great my friend. The team is growing indeed, i might need to add another employee over at the Colorado branch. Have a nude pinup to post someday, and I think this model fits the bill. Since we're TNT, the new gal will take the N maybe. Eager to see the next page already in this chapter Rod.
BTW, all that food looks yummy, now I got the munchies.
Splendid continuation Rod ! I am looking forward to how Alyssa contributes to the team ;). She is smart and intelligent and a great addition to the team. AR definitely is pissed with that no good sleazeball Slickie being released. Maybe she will get to use her powers on him someday. And yup, like Mike pointed out, Kinnie looks like a vision of calmness :). But then I don't think Kinnie is still fully aware of how bad this Slickie is. Classic surprised look on G4. Like how she is eyeing the floating the burger and hot dog. Once again amazing detailed work on the page.
This story keeps getting better and better all the time!! I'm anxious to see what happens next!! 'Ar' doesn't seem to know how to control her 'powers' yet.......that's cool how the hot dogs and cheeseburger starts to float thru the air.....I likey!!! 'lol'!
Super page! and to think I almost missed it. I have to say things are getting more interesting.... can't wait for more. and now Slickie is going to cause trouble for them, but nothing they can't handle, or at lease shake a big stick at!!.. awesome work you did on this page... sorry for taking so long to comment not a lot of internet time till I get my own set-up at home.
I just put out the next page of my story hope you like.
ok, I can't not do this one too (I've done all the ones in between)...this is a GREAT episode, love how it moves from affirming Alyssa's entry into the exclusive team, and ends with the pardon of a sleazeball (it feels awfully close to some of the people in our present-day world!) and Ar being beset by her hidden powers...
The light on the women (and table) is terrific; lots of space around them too in all the frames. You begin with Alyssa's departure as she readies herself for service; and then, quietly, the news of Slickie seeps into your tale, and then Ar goes berserk. (Well everyone else is pretty upset too.) You have the same togetherness in this as you had when they welcomed Mrs. Smith and Lilla into the fold; and your array of the women around the table is really fine visually, with your usual color sense, clothing sense, their always terrific appearance, how beautifully they hold themselves (their posture, etc---they convey professionalism as well as natural sexiness). When, suddenly, Ar turns it all around with a closeup of rage; the story turns to Slickie, and then to Ar as her powers take over the whole scene. (What did Barb say? "floating food is always a mystery when I see it"---you got no argument from me on that!!! Floating food'll do it every damned time, lol...)
Love how it ends with the women all looking up at the monitor (w/ that NNC logo---nice touch!), and then with the food flying away and Kinnie's warning/reassurance. You always end with something that leaves the door open for the next episodes. (Remember those old film shorts on saturday mornings, in theaters? They were dying out when we were kids, but they still ended with a train going off a cliff, or someone breaking into the room, and then "cut": Stay tuned next week......that's what you do, only often with subtler means. ((I mean, trains going off cliffs are a weeeeee bit extreme...)) ) You ended it perfectly, you've got pacing down pat. (In your cells, as they say.) Great light and color in this, love the women, their clothing too, and I also can't help but peer at the pics in the background---you never just stick up 'pics', they're always fascinating...terrific work Rod. Glad I could comment on some more this week: Hopefully when you post the next installment, we'll have an improved government. 'Cause if Trump gets his way, it'll be an affirmation that will only make him worse; and I don't wanna think about that...(this political announcement was paid for by me, and I approve the contents of this message...)