Fun In the Underground by Blarghd

Poser • Science Fiction • posted on Sep 05, 2007

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So Here's a Scene I started many times and dropped and started over,.. presented in its entirty for the first time tell me what ya think

Comments (10)

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mikeerson

7:07PM | Wed, 05 September 2007

I think??? I think the girl doesn't stand a chance. One guy in the background alread has a stance and is alert... Are you pulling for the girl?lol. very nice scene... I like the reflection/blur in the floor.

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doarte

7:15PM | Wed, 05 September 2007

Remarkable work, I'm glad are presenting it in its entirety and didn't give up. OUTSTANDING!

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Vremont

8:22PM | Wed, 05 September 2007

If the girl's half as good as Alice, those boys are in TROUBLE! Great pic :-)

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JCD

10:31PM | Wed, 05 September 2007

Yeah, she's definitely outnumbered, but I'm going to guess she'll give them a helluva fight. Great work!

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deci6el

12:35AM | Thu, 06 September 2007

Two suggestions: 1. I would work on the lighting a little more. Screen Right with the soldiers is working OK, glowing eyes, silhouettes, very nice. Screen left though, your back lit advertisement for DMT is overwhelming the shot and becoming the focus. Perhaps if the sign is going to be that bright then maybe a little more light on her via that source. 2. Her pose, she could be injected with a lot more emotion in her posture. Even if that emotion is one of professional lucidity, she could be poised to spring, run, attack, something. Or take it the other way and her body position could be such that it suggests wild animal panic and terror. You've got a very good beginning there.

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Biffowitz

6:12AM | Thu, 06 September 2007

Fabulous start, it's looking good already. I'd like to see a little more light on the main character, just enough to take the edge off the dark shadows. Nice work!

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devineydesignsllc

7:31AM | Thu, 06 September 2007

lov it! I would give a little more attention to your main character maybe adding light coming from the backlit sign.remember foreground,middleground and background.Just a well exicuted illustration!

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