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BEYOND PANDORA

Writers People posted on May 16, 2008
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These 3 poems were written a long time ago - just after my separation and the lead-up to divorce. Confidence, self-esteem, trust ... all shot to pieces. Still, I'm a stubborn kind of fool ... I get knocked down and I stand up again. PANDORA'S BOX You should have snapped hard fast the lock, and, unlike Pandora, sat upon the lid. Don't complain now that your innocence is lost your senses assaulted your feelings downcast: you knew beforehand what would come to occupy your space. Many a wise tongue has clucked at poor Pandora's sin: how much more foolish is the tongue who, having clucked, repeats the crime. Like mine. ---------------------------------------- SLIGHTLY USED Does anyone want a used donor card? For mine's of no use, now. Having given once I have no more heart within me left to give. ----------------------------------------- LUCK'S A LADY You've opened up again haven't you? Let the safe shield slip an inch. Haven't you learned yet that the slipper you carry will never fit? that there is no girl among the cinders waiting for you? Didn't you spread your cards along the table one last time? Risk one final toss of dice? Fool! Fortune will never smile on you, since Luck's a lady and ladies don't love you.

Comments (23)


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RodolfoCiminelli

5:01AM | Fri, 16 May 2008

Fantastic and very expressive realization Mike, this work have a very beautiful and creative postwork....!!!! Beautiful graphic aspect.....!!!!

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auntietk

8:28AM | Fri, 16 May 2008

I was going to pick a favorite, but couldn't. They're each the best, depending on which one I'm reading! You have an amazing talent, my friend.

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helanker

9:45AM | Fri, 16 May 2008

Yes, you certainly know how to use words, Mike. So beautiful poems and sad too. Very touching.

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dhanco

10:26AM | Fri, 16 May 2008

Such true and poignant words, Mike. They express the emotions of loss and separation elegantly. Beautiful, all of them.

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hipps13

10:55AM | Fri, 16 May 2008

Hi Mike I do not wear shoes so no slipper will fit me the words and image brought many thoughts and a smile or two for life's obstacles wonderful work sweet weekend to you Thanks for caring warm hug and love, Linda

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romanceworks

10:56AM | Fri, 16 May 2008

You say so much in a few short, perfectly chosen words. The greatest joy comes from loving and we want to forget the pain. Guess that's why we never really give up on it. CC

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leanndra

2:05PM | Fri, 16 May 2008

These are so sad! I think many of us have felt just those things that you express so well, and so personally. Sometimes life kicks you in the butt! I say kick it back! ;) Keep that flame burning brightly. Lea

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Meisiekind

3:47PM | Fri, 16 May 2008

There is so much emotion and pain in these poems Mike. I cringed while I read them - especially the last one. Wonderful play with words dear friend. Hugs, Carin

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VDH

4:11PM | Fri, 16 May 2008

Creative and Beautiful work!

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novelist

7:05PM | Fri, 16 May 2008

Good for you for standing up again. And poetry and art help us do that. Those of us who have had similar experiences in life understand those feelings well. Lovely verses with universal appeal. I could see you writing a poetry or chap book about loss, one about heritage, among other subjects . . . and how unusual that you also have the gift to illustrate them yourself.

lil_t

8:17PM | Fri, 16 May 2008

Ummmm... what to say here...a loss of words comes to mind. Maybe it's the relativity... such expression and talent in your writing! Blessings for you then and now, although I do believe you have come past these words you expressed and were witness to long ago! Thanks for sharing them with us!

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amota99517

10:08PM | Fri, 16 May 2008

Your pros are filled with such heart felt thoughts and move the reader to want to see more. You paint such lovely images in the mind with your words. Splendid work and then some!!!!

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tallpindo

5:05AM | Sat, 17 May 2008

Humble beginings are blocked by ill fame. For me it was Thornton. I found a brand of gas in Virginia ???? nope! But it led to a dead wino in the owners burned out truck and an empty cash box in Front Royal. A neighbor? he died leaving a yellow Cadillac and a black BMW to his widow. Finally I saw it in the paper yesterday in a book review. Captain Thornton was attacked by a Mexican cavalry unit to begin the Mexican-American War. That is how Colt looks to a Cuban. The reviewer said it was like the Tonkin Gulf incident.

vlaaitje

6:32AM | Sat, 17 May 2008

yes you have say so much within less words......wonderful so as always

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elisheba

6:45AM | Sat, 17 May 2008

I like the bitterness of those words, "Slightly used" is as short as effective...

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e-brink

6:55AM | Sat, 17 May 2008

Excellent illustration... great words. I particularly like 'Luck's a Lady'.

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A_Sunbeam

8:47AM | Sat, 17 May 2008

We all live in hope - get knocked down and get up again! Nice work!

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algra

12:46PM | Sat, 17 May 2008

Great Mike, both your words and the excellent picture!

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tizjezzme

8:00AM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Beautiful ... I love your writing. ((((Hugz))))

Wolfspirit

7:31PM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Mike, the last one provoked a thought. I have discovered often while attempting the role of a lady, ladies don't love their self. Today I can promise you as anyone else a truth. I'm no lady! As far as who ever came up with the term "lucks a lady", is the fool.

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beachzz

6:57PM | Mon, 19 May 2008

OH, it seems sad, but I also feel that spirit that defines you, the same thing that let you go on to write these words, and jump right back in. Even to have loved and lost.......I'd rather fall head over heels, savor every moment, then be burned spurned overturned than to never feel that kind of emotion.

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amirapsp

12:33PM | Wed, 21 May 2008

Fantastic image and composition...Hugs

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LovelyPoetess

11:07PM | Thu, 22 May 2008

Very succinctly written, without resorting to maudlinism. Bravo on your trio of works. : )


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