Operation Domino Pt 10 by eekdog
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finally after a 14 month span I finally got the urge to start up my Operation Domino series again, RodS new chapter of the T.N.A. and Marc's series Ionivka got me back into it. so here is the Colorado division of T.N.A.
I appreciate your time and wonderful words on my work, they are so highly appreciated, thank you, Steve
when I last left off I was at pt 9, so the first two image panels are from pt 9, rest are pt 10. Rebecca/Becca received a pkg addressed to her from Tina in pt 9, but the package was a bomb from the ISIS group led my Arshad. Rod helped me out by doing the bomb blast but spared her life with minor abrasions. I left it up to him on her fate. so after my first two panels the bomb goes boom!
was not sure if you can read the text I did here if not I typed the story below and if you don't understand English you can use a translator , thank you / Steve.
************************************************************Operation Domino PT 10*************************************************************************************
top panel left// Becca - Hi Tina, I just got your package. can't wait to see what you sent me hon.
top panel right// Tina- Hey Becca I have not sent you any package. Please do not open it, just set it down and back away. You know Arshad is targeting us.
middle pane left// Tenacious - Niki, Tina has just ordered an evacuation on the building, we have a probable bomb threat. Get out of the building now Lil sis.
middle panel left// Mr. Rabbit - A few things wrong here Niki, we don't get deliveries before 1 Pm and never before by the company DHL. Something is not right.
middle panel right// Niki - I will agree Tena, we just received a package from Rebecca at the NY office. BB has just determined it to be an explosive devise. We are on our ay out now.
lower left panel is just a capture of the T.N.A. building with the terrorist DHL van parked in front.
lower middle panel// Tina - It appears our terrorist fled the area and mixed in with the employees leaving the TNA building Tena. He or they might have abandoned the van because of the heavy crowd and could not pull away before we got here.
lower middle panel// Mr. Rabbit - They are using a pretty sophisticated triggering devise. Looks like that package had a installed camera so they could explode it when the target had it in hand. In this case I would guess Tina.
lower middle panel// Tena - Arshad is trying his damnedest to take you out Tina. When we get back inside I'll check security footage on who brought in the package.
lower right panel// Mr. Rabbit - Ok girls here is the update, info from Angelique says the package bomb did have a camera in it like the one we got. Security footage form NY showed Jamel Kabil leaving it. Our footage had Mohab Husmaar both from Arshad's group. Mohab is Arshad's right hand man and very deadly as Tina already knows.
to be continued..
Comments (55)
imagemaker
Very nice !!!
MagikUnicorn
Love it Super Coooool
marcPoser
Good storyline, excellent situation description, tense sequence; all the ingredients that make a story, interesting. The only problem is the low contrast in the text balloon (white on light/transparent blue), which can be read with great difficulty, at least for me; it is like listening to a conversation with a loud background noise. A different coloration scheme will make it much clearer. Otherwise, the page design and layout are also excellent, with your unique style that I like. I am eagerly waiting for the follow-up pages. Bravo, for that page.
goldie Online Now!
Really nice work on the panels, Steve--girls and settings look great. I do enjoy what you have been doing with each of your installments--look forward to your future installments :)
tetrasnake Online Now!
Superb, my friend!
Jean_C
An excellent thrilling series, Steve, awesome work! Thanks for the text under the images, so I was able to read the story with a translator!
Leije
Wonderful page, very well staged with a thriller atmo, and thank you for the text under, Steve !
Kaisoona
Exciting story. Looks great!
Palaemon
Very well done aventure!
Nightwind
Excellent work on the images and story!
donnena Online Now!
Great job!
ontar1
Fantastic scenes!
farmerC
Exellent work.
bugsnouveau
Cool work, Steve
Deva3D
Excellent image and work!
mtdana
I was able to read images but good idea to have text in the description as well. Nicely done Steve!!!
bakapo
Nice job with all the panels. This is a lot of work and it shows... it looks great! I could read the text, fine.
Madbat
It's been a while since you've done one of these I guess? I missed a lot while i was absent.
OkrimSlava
very well.
Faemike55
Steve! It is wonderful to see your series start back up again. Fabulous artwork and a gripping story. Keep up the great work.
VDH
Superb composition, Exciting story. !!
Tracesl
excellent
adrie
Super cool story, and i like all those images that is going with this story dear Steve, Love what you have done here.
Darkglass
Wow.... very cool, lots of work in this.....i'm going to have to backtrack and catch up, super instalment and render....!!
PhthaloBlue
Marvellous work on this!
imyourvillain
Sorry its been so long since I commented on your work. Just got a new desktop so for the past few weeks I havent done any of my own artwork or commented on anyones elses work. First I hope your still well with this whole covid-19 BS. Great job on your work, looks like you put a lot of time into it. Keep up the great work and stay safe steve.
Michael (villain Studios)
RodS
Outstanding work on these panels, Steve! Close call for the Girls.... Sounds like Things are getting pretty intense.... And they will be more so very soon... No spoilers, though... I can tell you that "someone" is paying off another "someone" to cause some problems...
You just reminded me I need to get my butt back to work on my end.... 😉
Diemamker
Awesome work!
anahata.c
First, I am very impressed that you bothered to write out all the dialogue, for those who have too-small a screen, or those who don't understand english well (and can't translate a .jpg). Second, I don't remember a dialogue piece from you for a while, so this was a treat! You conveyed the missed-catastrophe very well, as well as the intense intelligence all the women showed in the face of an immediate catastrophe. I don't remember your other installments well enough to remember all the characters...but I love the animal character (a dog, or a rabbit? Sorry if I don't know--bad memory!). I love him in there, and the r2 d2 robot, and you packed these with details---great computer and space ship stuff, and great screens: the first panel has some great visuals on those screens. And some complex halls and walls intersecting, etc. The last frame has a really cool perspective from the desk, and that great robot-looking machine on the left...Story-wise and visual-wise, you did a bang-up job. (I imagine this takes a lonnnnng time to do and compile.) Terrific work, Steve. And the blues throughout the image give a restful quality to an otherwise intense storyline.
OmniFX
Very cool story line and page. Everything well done from outfit to background to the lighting. Very interesting and sexy hot babes really look great. It is good you added the dialogue below because very difficult to read the balloon text. When I clicked on open full image it causes the text to distort a tiny bit and still a little difficult to read. It does have the magnifying glass with the + so I can zoom in even more to full size which really looks super fantastic and I can read perfectly but still need to scroll side to side and up and down to read and is difficult. Maybe keeping everything the same and changing the text to black with white border may help. Home run and two thumbs up on this render!