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Vue Scenic posted on Jul 27, 2014
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Hate when my artworks fail to impress me... this took over 6 hours to render, come to find out, that the left side car is a crappy model! grrrr Can't win em all folks! Have a nice day guys. also not impressed with the roadway... believe I am starting to suck at artwork :( ahwells.....

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Greywolf44

1:43PM | Sun, 27 July 2014

Hey Mike, all you are suffering from is lack of detail work. This is really a nicely formatted composition. Sky, clouds, trees and mountains are all good. The details are the foreground dirt, the asphalt and the paint on the cars, oh, and a driver for the red car. The dirt and roadway textures need to be scaled down a bit and maybe the asphalt could be a little less "Black". The car paint needs shine and reflectivity to look even somewhat real to the eye. Even a poor model car can look decent from this distance if you take time to optimize what you have. Hang in there and you'll do just fine :-) (Us "bay area" boys have got to stick together!)

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Mad-Mike

1:48PM | Sun, 27 July 2014

Thanks for the encouragement and 'constructive' criticism Bud! I almost threw in the wrench and said screw it! lol Some times we need a nudge to keep us in the mood for creating art, and you did a great job at that!!! well appreciated :-)

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iborg64

6:03PM | Sun, 27 July 2014

I agree with Greywolf 44 the trees and mountains look good a bit of work on the car and the road would make it a great image

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Thelby

6:54PM | Sun, 27 July 2014

I think you are on to something here Mike. Like Wolf said, a few more finer details and this would be a great looking scene. Don't beat yourself up over aomw left out details. It is not worth it. As Bobby McFerrin said; "Don't Worry, Be Happy"!!!

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jocko500

11:23PM | Sun, 27 July 2014

they right. do not worry it will come to you as you work and get more details in . most of it do look wonderful as the ones above say.

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62guy

3:09AM | Mon, 28 July 2014

I agree with the above comments. One more thing, the wall (?) along the sides of the road should be changed to a gravel shoulder. A few shrubs here and there among the trees would be nice, too.

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jp3319

11:37AM | Mon, 28 July 2014

Overall, not bad at all. A few afore mentioned details and it will be perfect! Still nice work though.


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