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Unfair seduction

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Apr 01, 2008
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Stomach knotted, blood clotted. Where do I fit? I feel like shit. Happily talking, nobody baulking - you suddenly go! My world takes a blow. I sit here and think; my heart starts to sink. What just happened? Mood all dampened. You don't understand that at your hand Vulnerability reigns. I throw off my chains, display the real me and choose to be free. You share quite a ride help me to decide to re-embrace life and yes I'm in strife. Now happy to flirt, I'm too open to hurt. Small things can hit hard, me, you could discard; I'm not one and only and now, I feel lonely. Get out of my head! You're already well fed! I don't need your madness; it only brings sadness. I need a distraction - another attraction? No, a world just for me where I can truly be free.

Comments (7)


netsia

8:49AM | Tue, 01 April 2008

This is great....distractions?....just turn your head :)

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auntietk

12:11AM | Wed, 02 April 2008

There's so much in this - well done!

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beachzz

1:02AM | Wed, 02 April 2008

Oh, wow, you've hit a chord here, this is just great!!

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D.C.Monteny

5:42PM | Wed, 02 April 2008

Hard hitting, a very good read!

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vaggabondd

12:08PM | Tue, 08 April 2008

Wonderful work. I love it :)

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meico

1:16PM | Thu, 10 April 2008

Powerful and packed with deeply felt emotional trauma ... albeit displayed with a brave and feisty face. Well written, my friend.

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mickuk50

2:47AM | Mon, 14 April 2008

very powerful writing .i love the emotion described here .excellent work :o) mick


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