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Hi all Thanks for the help on the last one. Follow above link for the full larger version. I would like to know if you think this is an improvement over the last one. Thanks

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Good work but it looks a bit--un-natural? Don't know how to explain properly other than that but can see all of the things which you have done which is good.

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Mmm , show a bit of the camera platform or vegetation in the foreground to take away the floating feeling or pull one of the trees closer, the palm trees are close enough to require more detailed texturing , the background lighting and haze say "early morning" , while the lighting on the trees suggests mid day.   

Thanks for the feedback. I'll try some of those suggestions.

Frank Hawkins/Owner/DigitalDaydreams

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