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Do me a favor. Check out the poetry on my site by Kayla Marie Weihrauch. She's 13 and my niece. I am very direct with her about her writing, but I post what she writes---exactly as she writes it. Let me know what you think, being totally honest so that I can pass on the input to her. She honestly wishes to be a writer. I encourage that. It is a childs view, but be honest. That is how I have told her to view any criticism. Choose one of her poems at the list please.

Mark S. Popham
http://www.markostimpy.com
markostimpy@gmail.com